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And now we're really rolling right along...

I'm ripping through so fast that you KNOW it's not beta'ed. Just point out the stupid mistakes and I'll fix 'em.

Broken Revenge
Rated: ADULT - Slave!fic (and right now someone other than Spike owns Xander!)
Previous parts using tags
Previous parts using memories



Behind him he heard Dareh's heavy footsteps wander away from the enclosure, and Xander breathed a little easier knowing that he wouldn't have an audience because he sure as hell wasn't breeding those women. Not that there was anything wrong with those women. Or what those women were doing, and holy hell Xander hadn't really understood how Tara and Willow could do the whole horizontal mambo, but the two brunettes were giving him a nice clear visual of exactly how lesbian sex worked.

And Xander suddenly realized that he had lost his gay card because his cock certainly was interested in that. Xander had a flash of panic that they might have given him something because he really shouldn't be interested in anything other than escape. Not even *that*. And oh boy, he had to wonder if Tara and Willow did *that*.

Tearing his eyes away from the lesbian porn fest that his 'harem' was putting on, Xander searched the edges of the enclosure with his eyes. In the part of the enclosure where he *wasn't* looking--nuh-uh, no siree, not looking at the lesbians—a couple of trees provided shade for their little fun fest. Next to the gate, a long narrow lean-to ran the length of the fence, and Xander went to explore that.

The solid beams were joined with mortise and tendon joints, so there were no loose bolts or sharp nails that Xander could make use of. A long board running the length of the lean-to had empty tin pans, so Xander figured dinner would eventually be served outside. On the outside end of the lean-to, a huge plastic container sat on a shelf with a tube hanging down. Xander grabbed the tube in his mouth and drank the luke-warm water since he didn't have anything else for his rumbling stomach.

Since standing still involved more thinking than Xander really wanted to do right now, he started off on a slow walk of the fence, visually searching every inch. Luckily, the barrier wasn't electrified, but Xander still didn't have a clue about how to get out, and he wasn't even sure he wanted to. If he proved that he had aggressive traits and more than a few passing thoughts about beating Dareh to a bloody, whimpering pool of demon flesh, he would get sold off in a second, and who knew where he'd be then.

Xander glanced over toward the women. His inspection of the fence had brought him ever closer, and they had stopped their little orgy in order to watch him and whisper. Xander thought he vaguely remembered this nightmare: naked and trapped somewhere while women pointed and laughed. Of course these women had their hands bound, and if they were laughing, they were polite enough to be too quiet for him to hear.

Xander turned his attention back to the fence as he stepped into the shade of the trees.

"If you're looking for some sort of magic door that will respond to 'open sesame,' you're not going to find it." Xander turned around and found himself face to face with one of the brunettes that had earlier put on the cable-worthy porn show. He shrugged noncommittally.

"I'm Brandy," the woman said. Xander opened his mouth to introduce himself, and he found that he didn't know which name to use. If these women called him Xander after Dareh had renamed him, he would be in serious trouble, but he certainly wasn't ready to call himself Onyx. He might be dumb as a stone some days, like when he insisted on going into that stupid ballcourt, but he really wasn't one.

"Yeah, first time you have to say it, it kinda sucks. I don't even think my old name anymore," Brandy said, and Xander found himself considering her with an open mouth. She looked normal with large brown eyes and hair that flowed past her wide shoulders in unruly curls. "I have some empathy," she explained. "Not enough to do anything useful, but enough to recognize that feeling of loss and confusion."

"I guess Dareh calls me Onyx," Xander finally answered.

"Good compromise," Brandy smiled at him. "You'll get used to it." Xander kept his mouth shut since any slip could result in him hobbled and chained when she bought herself some special treat by snitching on him to Dareh. And why did he suddenly feel like he was in the plot of some strange prison porn movie?

"So, how long are you here for?" Brandy asked.

"Um, I don't know. Until he decides to sell me?" Xander didn't mention the more likely possibility that Spike would show up and rip Dareh's head off. Oh please let Spike show up and start ripping heads.

"He bought you?" Brandy nearly squealed, and Xander stepped back so that he was pressed up against the fence.

"Nice, girl. Scare the boy away, and when we finally have a man who isn't some little half pint runt." A woman who was older than Xander, like nearly Joyce-type old walked up. "I'm Sky," she said with a flash of white teeth contrasting against her dark black skin.

"Um, Onyx?" Xander answered uncertainly. Two more girls stood behind Sky, one the tiny brunette Brandy had been playing with and the other the leggy blonde who had watched.

"This here's Sunshine and Carmy," Sky provided introductions with a nod. "So you're here to stay." Xander nodded mutely, caught somewhere between an adolescent fantasy and stark terror at what Dareh and these women expected him to do. "Dareh usually brings guys that don't come up to my chest and have cocks the size of pencils. It's nice to think we're going to have a real man around." With horror, Xander realized that he was significantly larger than a pencil since his cock had far fewer moral issues about this whole deal than he did.

The blonde swerved around Sky and pressed her hip into Xander's groin, making him squirm and groan as his cock came to full size. "Want to mate?" she asked with all the subtly of a rabid bear. That certainly helped his cock deflate some. Xander wondered if this woman had ever been in the vengeance business because she sure came off like a certain ex-vengeance demon he had known.

"Girl, you need to back off. The boy still has sleep spell in his eyes from the crate and you're acting like a bitch in heat." Xander found himself whispering a thank you to Sky.

"I don't want to end up on the breeding stool again. I hate that thing," Sunshine pouted as she flipped her long blonde hair out of her face with a forearm, and Xander could find himself sympathizing. He wasn't fond of the breeding leash and drugs, but that didn't mean he was going to start rutting with the first woman who threw her nicely formed taut breasts and wide pink nipples at him. And oh yeah, he was in trouble here.

"Dareh never expects the male to just start breeding the minute they come in here, and you'd better be grateful for that. Going right from the streets to Dareh you don't know how lucky you got it, girl." At that pronouncement, Sky turned her back on them and started walking back to where the girls had been before, leaving Xander with the three younger women. Taking one glance at the older woman's retreating back, Xander twisted away from the girls and trotted after her.

"So, have you been here long?" Xander asked as Sky reached the small hill under the trees and sat down.

"Been in demon slave pens for thirty years now. Been with Dareh for four," she offered as she waved a hand toward the hill next to her. Xander took the invitation and sat. "You?"

"Um, captured about eight months ago," Xander said.

"Lord, you're a baby," Sky exclaimed as she looked over at him. Xander had a flash of Joyce with her motherly concerned and shocked expression, but he was not going there since he also saw a whole lot more of Sky, and while she was older, her body still had plenty to lust over. His cock sure wasn't complaining about being near Sky although Xander was trying his best to ignore that. He'd gotten through high school classes with Buffy and Cordy in their competing skimpy outfits, so he could get through this. And really the whole drugged water thing was starting to feel like a possibility.

"So, captured?" Sky asked.

"Yeah, grabbed off the street," Xander said in a distracted tone of voice as he tried to push aside the anger he felt at Dareh's manipulation. Well, either Dareh had manipulated him or he was a sick bastard who had a hard on when his heart was being crushed at the thought that Spike might be…. And again with the not going there. Xander bit his lip and tried to concentrate on Sky. Actually he tried to concentrate on her short kinky hair that curled close to her head since focusing on other parts led to problems which led to anger which led to guilt, and oh god he was starting to think that an asylum might be the right place for him.

"Well that's sure dumb. And a good way to have an investigation come entirely too close to home." Sky snorted her disgust.

"But weren't you…" Xander let his words trail off as he looked at the three younger women who had resumed their early activities. Sunshine had her arm across Carmy's stomach, holding her down as she teased the woman's nipple. Xander groaned in pained frustration, and Sunshine looked up with a smile that made it perfectly clear that the show was for his benefit. Xander found the canopy of leaves above suddenly very interesting.

"I can see why Dareh likes you. They aren't going to mind at all if you join them," Sky offered. As if to make a point, Brandy's face disappeared between Carmy's legs, and the woman started making needy panting sounds that Xander's cock reacted to enthusiastically. But he wasn't looking. Nope. Not looking. Of course, if he had a hand, he would have gone behind a tree to finish himself, but that wasn't an option, so he stared at the swaying leaves and tried to use the control Leshar had beaten into him. Taking deep breaths he managed to get himself back to half mast.

Struggling to marshal the three brain cells that still functioned, Xander searched for the threads of the conversation.

"So, you guys weren't captured?" Xander really tried not to notice the way Carmy made little satisfied sighs as the other two women started slowly and gently kissing each other over her sated body.

"Sunshine was born on a farm. Carmy and Brandy were junkies living on the street. Brandy used to be a social worker but she just couldn't emotionally deal with what she saw and felt, so she started using. Me? I was an addict by the time I went to school. Ma used to give me stuff to keep me quiet while she entertained her men. When I was ten some weird looking dude offered to give me a better life than she could, she gave me up quick enough."

"Oh god," Xander's erection sagged as he considered the meaning behind those words. "Your mother?"

"Boy, you really are a baby if you don't think stuff like that happens. Truth is, the man probably spoke the truth. I'd be dead if I was still out there, and I saw Brandy when Dareh bought her. She wouldn't have lasted another week on the street."

"But she was free." Xander glimpsed down from the waving green leaves above them.

"Baby, none of us is free, before or after the demons. We got demons in ourselves to fight, and not everyone can win that fight. The demon who took Brandy off the street probably saved her life." Sky nodded toward the pile of women, and Xander glanced over to find Brandy trapped between Sunshine who straddled her from behind and sucked on her neck and Carmy who was locked in the most intense kiss Xander had ever seen. Brandy's bound hands moved as though trying to clutch Carmy's back, but without fingers to grab, they simply slid over Carmy's smooth, tanned skin. All three women made needy little sounds, but Brandy squirmed and groaned and writhed in frustrated need.

Oh god, Xander was walking the edge of orgasm just watching them. And back to tree watching and look the leaves had five points and that meant something. Too bad he never listened to his science teacher because he could use a science lecture to distract him right now. Hell, even a preying mantis teacher would be better than the little fantasies his brain sent up because he would definitely go to hell for doing that without a whole lot more torture or drugs. Nope. No sex, no babies, no breeding for the Xan man. He was just going to stare at the blue sky and green leaves and think monk-like thoughts. And shit, monks probably thought about the bible a whole lot and his brain was coming up with a big zero on that front.

"Go join 'em, Onyx." Sky's use of that hated name brought Xander back to reality.

"It's wrong," Xander whispered as he fought his own body. Oh shit he was in trouble. He tried conjuring the memory of Spike, but that didn't exactly make his cock unhappy.

"Oh please, they're puttin' on that show for you, so don't even try and say they don’t want it." Sky snorted.

"I won't give Dareh children to enslave," Xander hissed angrily even though he couldn't get his cock back under control this time.

"Is that…" Sky stopped. "Yeah, I know it's hard, babe." Xander concentrated on a swaying branch with a long streak of white that was either the world's biggest bird ish or some sort of disease. When something warm and tight and wet engulfed his cock, he yelled in surprise and lust. He didn't even need to look to know what Sky was doing, but the sight of her lips stretched out around his cock, her bound hands braced against his hip bones, pressing him to the earth confirmed it. She slid up and worked her tongue around the slit as she sucked.

"You don't… mphf… No," Xander couldn't form words as he tried to use his elbows to pull himself backwards, but his arms collapsed when she slid down on his cock with her tongue darting out to stroke the underside of the sensitive organ. She buried her nose in his curly hair, and now Xander bucked uncontrollable once and then twice before he felt himself coming.

Slumping back onto the grass with his arms thrown wide, Xander still couldn't form words when he felt Sky lay down next to him, her head cushioned on his arm.

"That's what I love about you guys. Once off and you're putty in a woman's hands," Sky laughed. "You can't fight this, Onyx. Dareh's about as good as you get. You don't breed and he'll just use the stool and breeding leash, and if you fight, he'll sell you, and you'll end up lord knows where."

"I know," Xander said in a quiet rage. "And I'm sure you'll be happy to help him," he said as he yanked his arm away from her. She had given him relief, but it was a cold, bitter form of it. But then, she was just part of Dareh's power over him, and he knew that. He was clueless guy sometimes, but he wasn't out and out stupid guy.

"So don't be a moron." Sky ordered frostily as she stood up. Xander just looked up at her without moving. Hell, he didn't have anywhere to go. Xander struggled against tears of rage, and he couldn't even say why until he realized what this reminded him of. It was straight out of his and Jesse's secret fantasies with the lesbian sex and the older woman, and Xander suddenly felt supremely dirty. Of course it was so close to that old forgotten fantasy that maybe it was an actual dream. Maybe he was still asleep in the crate and imaging this whole thing. Of course, if this was his imagination, Sky would be Spike, so maybe it wasn't a dream.

"Lunch time," a voice announced, and Xander blinked. The women were across the enclosure under the lean to and he realized time had somehow jumped. Or, more likely, he was losing what little bits of his mind he still had. He looked toward the fence where some new demon who looked rather humanish stood next the lean to waiting. Xander pushed himself up and started walking that way himself.

"Come on, Onyx, hurry up, boy," the demon called, and considering he looked more like a teenager than anything demonish, Xander found himself slightly annoyed. Either that or he was annoyed by the name. At least he hadn't picked chocolate because he would have a serious problem if he got annoyed every time he heard the word chocolate. The creamy goodness that was chocolate didn't deserve that kind of disrespect. Xander broke out into a jog as the smell of hot food hit his nose. Oh yeah, he was hungry.

When Xander got close, he wasn't sure about the rules here. Dareh had said no kneeling in the paddock, and Xander wasn't sure where that left him in terms of eating rules because the hand bindings certainly weren't going to allow him to feed himself. When he got within six feet of the demon, Xander realized he was taller than the kid and that the kid had a leather strap of some sort in his hand.

He stopped and ducked his head submissively without going to his knees. A master's words always overrode training orders, but Xander still half expected punishment as the boy came up to him. Instead the boy reached up and slipped the leather around Xander's neck loosely and took the trailing end in one hand. Xander was almost grateful for the leash since he was on unfamiliar territory here.

The boy led him to the board and clipped the leash to the chain link fence so that Xander couldn't move very far in any direction. He noticed the girls were already tied in place, and Xander stared in frustration at the small clip that held him here. All he needed was one opposable thumb, and he could unlatch that clip, but instead he had to stand and wait as the boy unloaded a small truck that stood just outside the gate.

The smell of warm food grew stronger, and Xander's stomach growled in anticipation as the boy carried a pail in. Xander stepped to the side as the boy used a scoop to ladle a thick stew into his pan, and to heck with manners, Xander just started eating ravenously. The boy had to slap him on the arm to get him to stand to one side so that he could add a second ladle before going down the line.

Xander wasn't even half through before the boy put the bucket back on the truck and returned. He tried to ignore the presence behind him, but then warm hands were on his waist. Xander froze. A hand ran down the front of his leg and then pulled on the shin. Xander shifted his weight to the other foot so the boy could pull it up. The boy repeated the action on the other leg, and Xander shifted again.

"Go on, Onyx, eat up." Only Leshar's training kept Xander from making an inappropriate comment about what the kid could do with the stew and the pan it came in. However, since he didn't doubt that would come at the price of a whipping and a whole lot more vigilance, Xander kept his mouth shut and ate, which really, wasn't keeping his mouth shut, but at least he wasn't talking.

The hand slid around and cupped his balls before firmly grasping his soft cock. Xander widened his stance before he even had a chance to realize he was doing it. The boy clucked approvingly.

"Looks like someone has already bred," the boy said with a slap on Xander's butt. "Wonder which girl you went for." Down the line Sky made a snorting noise. The boy laughed as he walked over to her. Xander had enough slack in the leash to watch the boy stroke Sky's shoulder.

"Nice, Dareh finally buys a stallion, and he breeds with the only infertile female on the farm. I guess you had to keep your role as alpha female, huh?" the boy asked.

"Yes, Posk," she said quietly. The boy gave her a slap on the butt.

"Mouthy," he accused her, and she just went back to eating. Xander was nearing the end of his own lunch and slowing down as the hunger was satisfied.

"Well at least we know you're a breeder," the boy, Posk, said as he returned to Xander, running hands down Xander's arms, which Xander carefully allowed to hang motionless. "And Dareh is right about your temperament." Xander had finished his lunch but he licked the bottom of his pan for lack of anything better to do. At least he did until Posk took the pans and left them standing in the lean to, chained to the fence. He walked out the gate to the truck. Xander considered the open gate and the waiting escape vehicle for just a second before he moved his gaze. Sky was watching him, and Xander reminded himself not to trust her. She might think that she didn't have choices, and maybe *she* didn't, but Xander refused to believe that. He had to believe that Spike was out there somewhere.

Posk came back and unhooked Xander before leading over to a section of the fence close to that open gate that taunted him with freedom. Xander could have growled when the boy hooked the leash to the fence and Xander was left to consider just how annoying the world was without opposable thumbs.

"Feet first," Posk said as he knelt down behind Xander. The boy repeated the maneuver with Xander's feet, and Xander allowed him to lift his feet without protest, putting one bound hand on the fence to help him keep his balance. This time Posk rubbed something cool into the skin on the bottom of the foot. When Posk bent the leg all the way up to his butt, Xander was confused until he heard the clicking noise, and somehow being given a pedicure like a horse made Xander so angry that he had a burst of adrenaline at the thought of snapping the kid's neck.

Under the lean to, Brandy pulled at her leash sharply, and Xander started chanting his acceptance mantra before he got himself in trouble. Of *course* he had to have an empath in his paddock. Once again proof that the universe hated him because having Brandy around meant he didn't even get privacy in his own head.

The boy put down one foot and pulled at the other, and Xander shifted to accommodate as his second foot was tended.

"Okay, down boy," Posk ordered as he unhooked the leash. Xander went to his knees, and Posk attached the leash lower down before stepping up behind him. Sneezing as something with an alcohol smell was sprayed into his hair, Xander squirmed a bit, and Posk was obviously stronger than he looked because firm hands held him immobile until he stopped. Xander froze in horror expecting some sort of punishment, but Posk just started brushing out his hair.

"Hands," Posk asked, and Xander raised his arms uncertainly. Taking two buckling leashes, Posk attached his hands to the fence before unlocking the small clasp that held the hand bindings in place and pulling them off. Xander watched curiously as the boy rubbed some sort of lotion into his hands and encouraged him to flex his hands several times before reattaching the hand bindings.

Xander patiently endured the rest of the grooming including a rubdown with some sort of powder before Posk moved him back into the lean to. Because he had been first, Xander then had nearly an hour of watching Posk briskly groom the others before finishing and taking them all off the leashes. At the end of this time, Xander had come to a number of conclusions, including the fact that Posk could get downright careless when he was comfortable. Sunshine and Sky had both had their hands leashed close enough that they could have unbuckled their own restraints if they had just a small distraction.

Feeling a lot more confident, Xander spent his afternoon under the trees and staring out across the farm at the dozen or so paddocks he could see from here. In most, groups of women huddled and looked back at him, and Xander decided he really needed to get out of here before they brought out the breeding leash because if he got all these women pregnant, there was no way Spike could buy them all.

Date: 2005-12-21 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denied-heaven.livejournal.com
ipe!
man spike better hurry!
or xander had better hurry n find a way out lol
xander wouldn't be able to live knowing he had enslaved children out there *sigh*

Date: 2005-12-21 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Yep, something better happen. He really can't deal with seeing his children enslaved. That would break him faster than his own enslavement

Broken Revenge 17

Date: 2005-12-21 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tistoo.livejournal.com
Wow, you're quick! *grins* Yay!

Still no Spike, as you know... and I'm getting more and more worried about poor Xander. Especially with Sky there.

Still, I'm sure you'll make things all better... and maybe let us find out what the HELL happened to Spike! *grumbles* Bad vampire! No biscuit!

I'd go on and on here, as I tend to do, but I'm actually on my way out for the evening, so I'll simply say... another lovely chapter, executed wonderfully; and another nail-biting moment for me. LOL

Beautifully done! SO glad you're on break! *grins*

~Tis

Re: Broken Revenge 17

Date: 2005-12-21 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
When I have nothing else on my plate, I do enjoy just sitting down and writing. I'm all ready for the holiday and off work, so you'll probably get one chapter a day

And Xander is about ready to bite his nails too, except he really can't with his hands bound up.

Date: 2005-12-21 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fbf.livejournal.com
*falls over dead*

*peeks open eyes to see if Spike is back, sees that he isn't, is dead again*

Date: 2005-12-21 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Now, now...

no dying during the holidays. Besides, if you die, you won't be able to read the end.

Date: 2005-12-21 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rudemuchness.livejournal.com
Wow! You're pumping these out so fast my heads spinin'. Man, Spike better hurry his ass up, Xan needs him.

Great stuff! I'd say more soon, but I have the feeling there will be =).

Adios

Date: 2005-12-21 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it, and yes, there is more coming very soon. I'm just taking a break after finished Chapter 18. I'll proofread it and put it up today.

Date: 2005-12-21 02:23 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Great new chapters...I'm thinking that you really don't need a beta.
Gotta say that I'm happy that Xander isn't being tortured this time even if his situation is bad. I'm not sure my poor heart could take any more of that kind of thing. Actually, I think it's a nice balance to have this type of captivity represented in the story also.
I liked the attention to details in these last two chapters...really gave me a good visual image of where he is and what's happening to him.
PS: I'm hoping that you're having Spike tortured during all this.

Date: 2005-12-21 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I love working with my regular beta and she does add a lot of color to my work, but she's busy and I'm in "turning out the fic fast" mode.

And I'm glad that you like this very different part of the slavery universe. They're a kinder, gentler form of evil

Date: 2005-12-21 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikes_heart.livejournal.com
You have me doing something I never, ever do. Jumping to the end of the chapter before reading it... looking for our beloved Spike! Where is he and what did you do to him???

So grateful you've been posting so often, and greedy enough I want more, more, more! **smooch**

Date: 2005-12-21 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
*I* didn't do anything to him, and whoever has done something to him is going to do what he/she feels like doing until he/she gets what he/she wants. These are demons with their own motivations.

And you're very welcome for the fast posts. Thank you for the feedback (and for trusting me through the dark parts)

Date: 2005-12-21 02:41 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] yanagi-wa.livejournal.com
When Spike comes back, I hope Xander doesn't speek to him for a week. I feel so sorry for Xander, all he wanted was his child, now he's in a real mess. A prison is still a prison no matter how nice.

Date: 2005-12-21 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Man, Spike disappears and everyone wants to hurt him. Poor vamp. And yes on the prison comment. Xander really needs to stay away from slavers from now on!

Date: 2005-12-21 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nandibble.livejournal.com
I think I know why Xander was sold and...if not where Spike is, what he's doing. I'll see if subsequent chapters (yay for the fast!) bear this out.

Date: 2005-12-21 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
It's fun to make predictions like that... I know I love to make guesses, even if I am usually wrong

Date: 2005-12-21 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikeskat.livejournal.com
Have I mentioned how much I *heart* you for turning out these chapters so fast? I'm half tempted to log off and log back on to LJ just to see if there's another one. *grin*

Poor Xander... schoolboy fantasy turned real, only to realize that it's not what he wants. And, he's so right about needing to find a way out of there. That's a lot of women, and numerous "pups" that could be in the offing.

Eagerly awaiting more... and the *whimper* return of Spike??

Date: 2005-12-21 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
You are very welcome. I do love writing when I have time to just sit and wallow in the slash. And Xander really is getting messed up in the head. His remembered fantasies and the harsh reality of his captivity are making him go screwier than ever.

Date: 2005-12-21 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cindershadow.livejournal.com
( . . . of course you know I'm starting to feel uncomfortable around my horses now . . . )

Ah, the whole "naked in public" nightmare blending with the embarrassing teenaged boy sex fantasies!

I too adore you for this rapid turnaround time--I've been hanging out at home getting over a cold, and it's great to have these to keep me company!

Date: 2005-12-21 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I think your horses are perfectly happy out there. Do try to avoid putting any men out there in the corral with them. And I'm glad I could make your cold a little less miserable!

Date: 2005-12-21 03:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eithnex.livejournal.com
Thank you for the quick update! I really liked the interaction between the women and Xander. I hope he's careful and doesn't do anything too rash. Right now he's fairly safe but if he tries to leave...not knowing where he is or anything...he might end up in a worse place. I still don't know how this can resolve without a great deal of pups in the picture. I'm sure Dareh won't wait to long before he breaks out the drugs and breeding leash. I hope Spike will be coming soon. Well as the saying goes..live in hope, die in despair. Thanks for another great chapter!

Date: 2005-12-21 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
If he gets sold again, it could get really ugly with the torture and the possibility of being taken to another dimension. HOwever, if he stays, sooner or later Dareh will make him breed. I think Xander would rather endure the torture himself. So, don't bet on him not doing something stupid.

Date: 2005-12-21 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tempestsreach.livejournal.com
Every guys worst nightmare! or not!. Lovein' this and the speed your updating, wow. I must say I'm still hangin' as to where Spike has got too. And go Xan, with all the free thinkin' and planning, don't think he would have been capable of this a short while ago.

Date: 2005-12-21 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
You're right that Xander couldn't have done this much thinking even a month earlier. Hunting with Spike and starting to deal with his own anger has really freed him from some of the shackles in his own mind.

Date: 2005-12-21 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] texanfan.livejournal.com
Winter break is very good.:) Interesting perspectives from the women. Adds q2uite a bit to the ambiguity of the situation. Sure thye were free on the street, free to die from an overdose or some other manner. Sky's age is also telling. She's hardly old but she's not young and bouncy like the others.

I feel a little sorry for Dareh. He honestly thinks he's being a kind good owner, and in many ways he is. This is certainly a beter situation than if Xander had found himself in Leshar's hands again. If Xander were a different kind of man he'd be in paradise. All the sex he wanted with no responsibility for the resulting children. I know a lot of guys who'd be out on the street shouting "Take me, take me." But Xander is a geek male and they are a superior breed, in my humble opinion.

Getting back to Dareh, I'll be a little sorry when Spike enviscerates him.

Date: 2005-12-21 08:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Winter break is very good, and I'm glad you enjoyed the different perspective here. These women aren't looking for a rescue, and if Dareh had bought Xander in the first place, I can see Xander truly breaking and becoming one of these complaisant slaves. And you're right that some men would consider this a hot fantasy, and Xander might have enjoyed the senario as a bedtime FANTASY, but the reality is a little different.

Date: 2005-12-21 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanbot.livejournal.com
I've been bad about commenting, but I've been here hanging on every chapter. Damn, girl. The things you do to us! Still a great story!

Date: 2005-12-21 08:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Well I'm glad to know that you're reading and enjoying! And I'm glad that so many chapters later you're still enjoying the story.

Date: 2005-12-21 05:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reddwarf75.livejournal.com
That place is creepy *makes face*
Marie

Date: 2005-12-21 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
VERY!

In some ways, creepier than the auctions.

Date: 2005-12-21 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueaisling.livejournal.com
*peeks around the corner looking for spike* He will show up soon..right? We can't leave poor Xander in this fix.

Date: 2005-12-21 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Hmmmm... we'll see.

*insert evil laughter*

Date: 2005-12-21 10:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taruma16.livejournal.com
I won't comment anymore. This hurts!!!
Maybe I should do as [livejournal.com profile] amejisuto and come back reading when Spike is back! *wail*

It's almost Christmas for f** sake! *sob, plead*

Date: 2005-12-21 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Oh no! But no one is torturing him! No two cock-demon. No whips or chains.

Date: 2005-12-21 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelicvampyre.livejournal.com
Double the fun! I got two chapters when I logged on! But honey this is getting bad! I want spike back and I want him NOW!

Pretty please?

Date: 2005-12-21 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
My stories always have a dark place they go to. It's my thing--and then I wonder why people call me angst girl. Well, duh ;)

Date: 2005-12-21 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com
Hey, babe. Sorry I haven't commented on the last few updates. I had a computer emergency over the weekend. (OMG!!!! My computer DIED and it wouldn't turn on and it made this little sighing sound as it went off and it was so sad and *gibber* But I got a new battery and power cord and all is well again in Djinanna-land. *whew*)

Anyway, I'm fighting against the whole claustrophobia thing here and reading avidly. Xander *is* a sweet-tempered little thing, but he's more than that. Well, duh, obviously. The whole fighting between the two conflicting courses of action ("accept" -vs- "kill them all") is fascinating, as is the input from Sky and the other girls. (Though it also really gives me a totally different perspective on the Black Stallion books I devoured as a child, with the breeding farm and all. Way to despoil my childhood there. *g* Hey, the lead human character in that series was an Alec. Huh. And in a totally different direction, this story is so much better than the Anne Rice Beauty trilogy, whatever name she wrote it under, though if "ponies" are mentioned here, I will probably fall off the sofa and scare the cats.)

What else.... Spike?! EEEEEEEEEEEEE! Where is he? What's happened to him? I guess he had a reason for being concerned and wanting to leave ASAP - if only Xander hadn't insis- well, of course he insisted on staying. He's Xander and he was on a mission.

I do take exception to one thing (semi-tongue in cheekishly) - I am totally sure that every vet I've taken my cats to would be totally *delighted* if their kitty patients were able to talk to them. No more relying on dumb human owners' weird interpretations of behavioral clues.

Obviously, the demon equivalent of PETA needs to start changing some attitudes about the human "animals".

And will Calsha be of help in locating Xander? Where the heck *IS* Spike, anyway?

I'm kinda figuratively sitting here sucking on my thumb and clutching my teddy bear while waiting for the next installment. Yay! for vacations and fast writers!!!

And have a good Winter Solstice...

Date: 2005-12-21 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Geez, sorry about the computer there. That really sucks, but I'm glad you're back in business. I hadn't even thought of the Black Beauty series, but you're kinda right. Dareh is the loving owner who just wants to make things better for his darling little abused stallion. He really doesn't see what he'd doing as bad at all. The Anne Rice books I haven't read, so I can't comment on those. I can't imagine calling the humans "ponies" though.

However, you're right that Xander wouldn't have walked away from the auction even if he had known this could happen because he doesn't give up on the people he loves, and he loves his unborn child even without meeting him/her. So now either Xander or Spike has to do something drastic before things get entirely too ugly.

Date: 2005-12-21 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com
The computer she is very happy right now. The new battery and power cord really agree with her. ::pets my Boudicca::

I hadn't even thought of Black Beauty (and *now* I've got the image of little demon girls petting Xander and cooing at him and feeding him sugar). The Black Stallion books are a different author, with a thoroughbred racing background combined with mysterious desert stallion foundation stud. The author was incredibly prolific and wrote several other series-es as well (with incredibly imaginative names like The Island Stallion series *g*).

Anne Rice's Beauty series, written as AN Roquelaure. The Sleeping Beauty Novels: The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty/Beauty's Punishment/Beauty's Release Soft-core BDSM with harems and kidnapped princes and princesses and lush overblown purple Anne Rice prose and *many* anatomical improbabilities, like all Anne's soft-core BDSM, that's kinda enjoyable but also provokes a lot of eyebrow raising and eyerolling.

And thus ends today's session of Books In Print. *g*

Date: 2005-12-21 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com
Oh good grief, there are so many shades of grey here. Girls off the street who would have been dead, women who've been in demon control for 30 years and they think Xan is a baby because he's so new to the life even though he feels like he's been there a hundred years
I know the lesbian sexfest is tempting, but he's so struggling with his emotions and his libido and the humiliation of being groomed was just heartbreaking. Glad his brain is still going because he really needs to kick his master's butt!

Goes back to stabbing a Spike doll, because I don't care at this moment what your excuse is.. Identify much....

Date: 2005-12-21 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I really wanted to show a version of the slave trade that was more self-sustaining. The way Leshar and the West Coasters abused humans, they would constantly need new stock. These people are more careful and more caring and creepier. Lots and lots of gray (including Dareh himself being physically gray). And yep, Xander's brain is working pretty good considering what he's been through.

Date: 2005-12-23 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyghtpet.livejournal.com
Ok, so I am caught up to this point now!!

I have gotta say that Spike better have a damn good reason for Xan being in this position! He better have an ingenious plan in the nick of time or be horribly wounded in some way.

Date: 2005-12-27 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Oh yeah he needs a good reason. His slave just might consider slapping him upside the head for this one!

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