Great descriptions, as usual. I'm a bit confused at the end (which is great, if that's what I'm supposed to be!)--because the demon's words ("Did fine") seem at odds with his actions (the muzzle). But maybe this is just because we--and Xander--don't really understand all the rules here? So I'm eager to see what comes next!
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Date: 2005-12-06 03:31 am (UTC)