The problem with sequels is that you have to balance story telling and putting it within the universe.. And yes, Cyla was slaved out, but she didn't get abused.
I need to make it clearer that Verly is staying in the main house whereas Naite is in the bunkhouse.
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Date: 2012-11-22 04:05 pm (UTC)I need to make it clearer that Verly is staying in the main house whereas Naite is in the bunkhouse.