Possible Edit: "He hurt us. It's not okay, and some days I want o track him down and drag him back here while insulting his intelligence. " TO track him down.
Can I just say that it is really, really heartwarming to see how dedicated and loyal Bonnie is to Xander. She thinks he can do anything, from making Spike come back to the clan to making Buffy be nice to him again. You really captured her child-like faith in him perfectly, I think, and I think it says a lot about Xander that she's the first person to HAVE faith in him and he's doing all he can not to ruin it.
Bonnie still doesn't trust Willow or Buffy, but I think she could learn to like Dawn (even with the ten year age difference)... which makes me wonder if Xander would ever hit up Dawn for babysitting duties like he does Clem. Gods and demons know that Xander's house would be safer than Buffy's. Which also makes me wonder if the First would be able to reach Xander's house (since you are doing an abridged 7th season).
And is it just me, or is anyone else wondering if Buffy's last death called up another slayer, like her first one called up Kendra and then her death called up Faith. Would Buffy's second death call up another Slayer and just no one found out about it?
Awesome chapter, ma'am, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. Keep up the great work!
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Date: 2010-08-08 05:56 pm (UTC)Can I just say that it is really, really heartwarming to see how dedicated and loyal Bonnie is to Xander. She thinks he can do anything, from making Spike come back to the clan to making Buffy be nice to him again. You really captured her child-like faith in him perfectly, I think, and I think it says a lot about Xander that she's the first person to HAVE faith in him and he's doing all he can not to ruin it.
Bonnie still doesn't trust Willow or Buffy, but I think she could learn to like Dawn (even with the ten year age difference)... which makes me wonder if Xander would ever hit up Dawn for babysitting duties like he does Clem. Gods and demons know that Xander's house would be safer than Buffy's. Which also makes me wonder if the First would be able to reach Xander's house (since you are doing an abridged 7th season).
And is it just me, or is anyone else wondering if Buffy's last death called up another slayer, like her first one called up Kendra and then her death called up Faith. Would Buffy's second death call up another Slayer and just no one found out about it?
Awesome chapter, ma'am, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. Keep up the great work!