I love how the story is progressing. One quibble though: you have Simon referenced in this section and it doesn't read right, i.e. Mal stopped eating for a second. "I suppose that means that we'll need to figure out what he's going to do."
"He's a doctor," Simon said as if that explained everything.
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Date: 2009-12-27 06:34 pm (UTC)"He's a doctor," Simon said as if that explained everything.