Wow! I can so feel the 'I told you so' when Giles hears of this! :-)
Awesome chapter!
Wee fixes: -he growled as Xander ran the bell [rang] -and I'm sure he's very proud [I'm sure he'd be] -Angel made and awkward wave [an awkward] -as he hands went to places [as his] -You're a good yourself [You're good]??? -Buffy Ann Summers [Anne] -"I think you need to wait for an ambulance. [ambulance."] -Unlike so the others he'd turned [Unlike the] -he'd never tired of Williams desperate struggle [William's] -far so than men [far more so]
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Kin Of The Heart 14
Date: 2008-07-23 07:30 am (UTC)Awesome chapter!
Wee fixes:
-he growled as Xander ran the bell [rang]
-and I'm sure he's very proud [I'm sure he'd be]
-Angel made and awkward wave [an awkward]
-as he hands went to places [as his]
-You're a good yourself [You're good]???
-Buffy Ann Summers [Anne]
-"I think you need to wait for an ambulance. [ambulance."]
-Unlike so the others he'd turned [Unlike the]
-he'd never tired of Williams desperate struggle [William's]
-far so than men [far more so]