Kin of the Heart
Jun. 19th, 2008 04:51 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Yep, two stories in two days. This muse must have eaten her Wheaties. In this universe, Xander challenged Angel right up front--called him a pedophile to his face. And from there, everything's changed.
Previous parts:
Part one: Bumbling to a Save
Part two: Family Ties
Part three: Devil in the Details
Part Four: Bad Karma
Part Five: Rust Upon Iron
Part Six: Mending Fences... or tearing them down
Part Seven: Quiet Waters Mirroring Undistorted
Part one: Bumbling to a Save
Part two: Family Ties
Part three: Devil in the Details
Part Four: Bad Karma
Part Five: Rust Upon Iron
Part Six: Mending Fences... or tearing them down
Part Seven: Quiet Waters Mirroring Undistorted
Bait, Swindle, and Self-destruct
After Willow and Buffy tried to visit Xander, his parents figured out that their son was spending more nights out than at home. They put down their foot to keep him home, but now Angel is ready to put his foot down. Xander doesn't have time to train, he isn't getting homework help, and the parents have just gotten in his way one time too many.Tony Harris checked the name on the office against the notarized letter they'd received.
"Is this it?" Jessica asked, her eyes bright with excitement.
"Yep. And here I thought your family was good for nothing," he joked. The excitement in her eyes dulled for a second, and Tony let it drop. Her family were a bunch of stuck up assholes who had dropped her and her father quick enough when the old man had lost his money. If Tony hadn't stuck by Jessica after she got pregnant, they would have turned her out like yesterday's garbage. He had no idea why she insisted on sticking up for them. Yeah, his family had a couple of rotten apples hanging from the branches, but they weren't rotten at the root. And now, with Alexander hanging onto that rich bitch from school, he looked to be taking after his mother's side.
He pushed open the door and stopped short as a large man stood a foot inside. "Oh, hey, we got a letter," he said, holding the letter up. This guy was not looking like a lawyer. He looked more like that guy that Bruce had collect a few gambling debts.
"Mr. and Mrs. Harris?" he asked, holding out his hand. Tony surrendered the letter and the man took it before retreating behind a large desk. The name plate was brass: Angel O'Connelly, Esquire. That must have cost a pretty penny. Then again, the entire office smelled of money. Tony sank into a leather chair across from the lawyer, and Jessica followed a second later.
The lawyer leaned forward and clicked on a brass desk lamp, which seemed unnecessary since it was day, but heavy red curtains covered the windows. The whole room gave Tony that feeling he'd had when he'd egged his English teacher's car and gotten called into the principal's office.
"So, you're Destry LaVelle's lawyer," Tony said, trying to sound friendly. He didn't even make his normal jokes about the LaVelles' horrible taste in names. Alexander insisting on being called 'Xander'... that was all Jessica's fault. If he'd married a good solid girl, he would have gotten lots of kids with normal names, and they would have been on the football team or basketball team or some shit like that, too. "I thought old Destry died way back."
"He disappeared," Jessica said softly, not quite contradicting him.
"The matter of his will has only now come to my office," Mr. O'Connelly said as he leaned back. The man looked too young to be much of a lawyer, but his suit—like his office—stank of money, and Tony needed that money. Neither Jessica or Alexander were easy on his pocket, and California was an expensive state. "And the terms of Mr. LaVelle's will are rather specific."
"Specific?" Jessica asked, looking worried for the first time. "Specific about what?"
"About young Alexander," Mr. O'Connelly commented, steepling his fingers in front of him in a way that made Tony even more nervous. If that kid screwed up some inheritance, Tony was going to take it out of his hide. It was about time the kid started to work anyway. His old man always said that when a boy's old enough to go running around all night he's old enough to work all night. Besides, that would keep him away from that Donella bitch he was dating. No way did he want his son getting stuck marrying some bitch who would never let him forget that he would never make as much money as her late sainted father.
"Alexander's a wonderful young man," Jessica said with a big plastic smile. The lawyer didn't seem impressed.
"Mr. LaVelle was concerned that he not fall prey to the temptations that seem so common in today's young people," the lawyer said, and it was almost funny because with his spiky hair and build, he looked like he should be a running back for some college team, not a lawyer complaining the younger generation.
"Xander isn't into drugs or free sex or any of that. We've raised him with good morals and values," Jessica said, trotting out that old, tired 'aren't we a perfect family' routine of hers. But if there was money in the offering, Tony was a little more willing than usual to go along with her.
"Yes, well I made some inquiries on my own. I volunteered with the school and have spent several evenings tutoring Xander."
"You what?" Tony demanded. If this asshole tried to keep their money because Xander had said something, Tony was suing his ass off. "I never gave you permission to speak to my son."
"Then you're turning down the inheritance? I have that paper right here although I had not thought you would choose to turn down the money."
Jessica slid forward on her chair until she nearly tumbled out of it. "Turn down? We never turned down anything! Tony was just concerned that you didn't do anything to upset our Xander. He was particularly close to cousin Destry."
The lawyer raised an eyebrow and just stared at them while being perfectly still. Tony could swear the man wasn't even breathing.
"I didn't mean to say we'd turn down the money," Tony finally said, and that was the closest this asshole was getting to an apology. It seemed to be enough though. He nodded.
"Mr. LaVelle was very specific. He wanted Alexander to have access to an educated male to act as tutor and mentor."
"Mentor? That sounds like a fag," Tony said with a frown. He knew what older men wanted with boys, and his boy wasn't having nothing to do with that.
The lawyer sighed. "Mr. Harris, I assure you that I am not now nor have I ever been gay. And while I have no intentions of providing a history, the women in my past leave little doubt about my taste in sexual partners," he said with a sort of fancy disgust that just made Tony want to get out of the room. The promise of money was the only thing keeping him in his seat. "Mr. LaVelle wanted Xander to live up to his potential. The firm explained that he had no right to interfere with another man's family."
"Damn right," Tony exclaimed, happy that he could agree with something this lawyer was saying. However, now the lawyer had an even more disgusted look on his face.
"The firm helped him draft this document." Angel O'Connelly, Esquire pushed a thin stack of papers across the desk toward them. "Here is the short version. I am to have partial custody of Xander, including a say in medical and legal decisions and visitation rights." Tony opened his mouth to object to that but the lawyer just talked right over him. "And in return there is a trust fund set up to provide you with five thousand dollars a month."
"Five thousand? That's all?" Jessica asked quietly. Tony almost told her to shut up. He was the one who worked, and he knew how many overtime hours he had to put in for five thousand dollars.
"Five thousand a month for 15 months until Xander graduates, which is $75,000 dollars. There is an additional $10,000 for signing the custody paperwork today, and a $25,000 bonus after Xander's graduation provided that I sign off that you have been cooperative and helpful during this process." The lawyer smiled, but it wasn't a nice smile. It was like one of those men who just dare you to take a swing because they know they have a tire iron behind their back.
"And what exactly does cooperative mean?" Tony asked suspiciously.
"It means that you allow me to work with Xander. He lacks faith in his own abilities and his grades are only now starting to come up."
"He was never good with school," Jessica said apologetically.
"Then I will help him find something he is good at after he graduates; however, your only choice is to give me partial custody or to forfeit the inheritance." The lawyer opened a drawer, and given the man's expression, Tony tightened up wondering if he had a gun in there. Instead O'Connelly pulled out a bit of paper. He slid it across the desk, and Tony reached for it. It was a check. It was a $10,000 check. Damn that was a nice chunk of change, even if it wasn't enough to make Jessica happy.
Tony glanced over, and Jessica was chewing on her lower lip. The bitch was about to say something that would ruin this, he just knew it.
"Sign the papers," Tony told her.
"But Tony..."
"Sign."
"He's our son."
"This is your fucking cousin who set this up. Your family always has hated me, and now your fairy cousin is reaching out from the grave for his chance to poison Xander against hard work and honest living. Xander's smart enough to figure out that bullshit smells like bullshit, so I'm not worried about him. I am, however, worried that we don't have money for that new paint job for the house or that fancy wine you like to drink." Tony was proud of his ability to bribe and threaten his wife at the same time, and just like he expected, she crumbled under his attack. She quietly signed the papers. Tony followed, adding his scrawl to his wife's John Hancock before pushing the papers back over to the lawyer.
"The check is yours. To get the rest of the payments, you'll need to appear in front of a judge three weeks from tomorrow to have the papers finalized." Now the lawyer looked more relaxed. It looked like good old dead Destry had found himself a lawyer who cared about actually getting the job done. Every lawyer Tony'd ever talked to just wanted the fee up front.
"Oh," the lawyer said suddenly as though he'd just remembered something. "I have a business trip tomorrow; it lasts for a week. As a show of cooperation, I think you should allow Xander to accompany me so that we can get to know each other and work on his math grades. They've been dropping in the last two weeks."
"But..." Jessica started. Tony glared the woman into silence.
"That'd be fine, but if he needs clothes or food or something, I expect you can take care of that since he'll be in your custody."
"Agreed," the lawyer said as he stood up, and Tony got the feeling that the meeting was over. That was okay; he needed to get the check cashed anyway. And then he was going to call work and tell them he wouldn't be in for the rest of the day. A dead relative was reason enough for a well-deserved day off.
Tony stood up and held out his hand to his wife before he pulled her from the room. Today had worked out pretty damn good, all things considered. He might even hate Jessica's relatives a little less now... especially the dead ones. Dead was always good.
Angel watched the Harrises leave. He'd met slime demons he liked more than those two. Walking over to the window, he raised the shade and stood in the light of the window as he watched them walk to the curb, still talking. Mrs. Harris' hands were fluttering in front of her. Angel didn't know what was worse: Tony Harris' lack of concern or Mrs. Harris being concerned but not concerned enough to go to battle for her son. If Angel had been a pedophile, the Harrises would have just turned over a good deal of control to a monster. Technically, he now had 60% custody of Xander.
Fingering the Ring of Amara, Angel wondered what Spike would think when he came home and found out that $110,000 was gone from the accounts they'd set up from the other treasure that had been in the crypt with the ring. Oh, Spike wouldn't blink to spend that much on Xander, but he was going to be pissed that Angel had paid the Harrises off instead of just eating them. And Angel knew that he couldn't just claim that he wanted to protect Xander from the guilt of being friends with his parents' killer. With a fraction of that money, Angel could hire someone to kill the Harrises on some night when he had a solid alibi.
Spike wouldn't understand that Angel did it because of his soul, but he would just have to have another conversation with his childe. He'd helped cure Drusilla and he staked vampires and he paid off the Harrises all for the same reason: he thought it was the right thing to do. After centuries of killing, or, even worse, doing nothing, Angel was trying to make the right choices.
Of course, more and more he was finding that there was a dearth of right choices out there. He had to pick between bad and less bad. Kill Xander's parents, allow Xander's parents to ruin him, or give Xander's parents just enough money to seriously damage themselves. Angel was doing his best. By the time Spike wandered back to Sunnydale, he might even be able to see the natural consequences of two drunks being given too much money. That would amuse him. And when the money ran out... well, that was just going to be ugly. But at least their blood wasn't splattered across the wall.
Standing in the sun and feeling the warmth soak into his skin, Angel watched as the Harrises pulled away from the curb and headed back to their sad little lives with just enough money to encourage them to do such sad little things with those lives. And he didn't feel guilty at all.
"Is this it?" Jessica asked, her eyes bright with excitement.
"Yep. And here I thought your family was good for nothing," he joked. The excitement in her eyes dulled for a second, and Tony let it drop. Her family were a bunch of stuck up assholes who had dropped her and her father quick enough when the old man had lost his money. If Tony hadn't stuck by Jessica after she got pregnant, they would have turned her out like yesterday's garbage. He had no idea why she insisted on sticking up for them. Yeah, his family had a couple of rotten apples hanging from the branches, but they weren't rotten at the root. And now, with Alexander hanging onto that rich bitch from school, he looked to be taking after his mother's side.
He pushed open the door and stopped short as a large man stood a foot inside. "Oh, hey, we got a letter," he said, holding the letter up. This guy was not looking like a lawyer. He looked more like that guy that Bruce had collect a few gambling debts.
"Mr. and Mrs. Harris?" he asked, holding out his hand. Tony surrendered the letter and the man took it before retreating behind a large desk. The name plate was brass: Angel O'Connelly, Esquire. That must have cost a pretty penny. Then again, the entire office smelled of money. Tony sank into a leather chair across from the lawyer, and Jessica followed a second later.
The lawyer leaned forward and clicked on a brass desk lamp, which seemed unnecessary since it was day, but heavy red curtains covered the windows. The whole room gave Tony that feeling he'd had when he'd egged his English teacher's car and gotten called into the principal's office.
"So, you're Destry LaVelle's lawyer," Tony said, trying to sound friendly. He didn't even make his normal jokes about the LaVelles' horrible taste in names. Alexander insisting on being called 'Xander'... that was all Jessica's fault. If he'd married a good solid girl, he would have gotten lots of kids with normal names, and they would have been on the football team or basketball team or some shit like that, too. "I thought old Destry died way back."
"He disappeared," Jessica said softly, not quite contradicting him.
"The matter of his will has only now come to my office," Mr. O'Connelly said as he leaned back. The man looked too young to be much of a lawyer, but his suit—like his office—stank of money, and Tony needed that money. Neither Jessica or Alexander were easy on his pocket, and California was an expensive state. "And the terms of Mr. LaVelle's will are rather specific."
"Specific?" Jessica asked, looking worried for the first time. "Specific about what?"
"About young Alexander," Mr. O'Connelly commented, steepling his fingers in front of him in a way that made Tony even more nervous. If that kid screwed up some inheritance, Tony was going to take it out of his hide. It was about time the kid started to work anyway. His old man always said that when a boy's old enough to go running around all night he's old enough to work all night. Besides, that would keep him away from that Donella bitch he was dating. No way did he want his son getting stuck marrying some bitch who would never let him forget that he would never make as much money as her late sainted father.
"Alexander's a wonderful young man," Jessica said with a big plastic smile. The lawyer didn't seem impressed.
"Mr. LaVelle was concerned that he not fall prey to the temptations that seem so common in today's young people," the lawyer said, and it was almost funny because with his spiky hair and build, he looked like he should be a running back for some college team, not a lawyer complaining the younger generation.
"Xander isn't into drugs or free sex or any of that. We've raised him with good morals and values," Jessica said, trotting out that old, tired 'aren't we a perfect family' routine of hers. But if there was money in the offering, Tony was a little more willing than usual to go along with her.
"Yes, well I made some inquiries on my own. I volunteered with the school and have spent several evenings tutoring Xander."
"You what?" Tony demanded. If this asshole tried to keep their money because Xander had said something, Tony was suing his ass off. "I never gave you permission to speak to my son."
"Then you're turning down the inheritance? I have that paper right here although I had not thought you would choose to turn down the money."
Jessica slid forward on her chair until she nearly tumbled out of it. "Turn down? We never turned down anything! Tony was just concerned that you didn't do anything to upset our Xander. He was particularly close to cousin Destry."
The lawyer raised an eyebrow and just stared at them while being perfectly still. Tony could swear the man wasn't even breathing.
"I didn't mean to say we'd turn down the money," Tony finally said, and that was the closest this asshole was getting to an apology. It seemed to be enough though. He nodded.
"Mr. LaVelle was very specific. He wanted Alexander to have access to an educated male to act as tutor and mentor."
"Mentor? That sounds like a fag," Tony said with a frown. He knew what older men wanted with boys, and his boy wasn't having nothing to do with that.
The lawyer sighed. "Mr. Harris, I assure you that I am not now nor have I ever been gay. And while I have no intentions of providing a history, the women in my past leave little doubt about my taste in sexual partners," he said with a sort of fancy disgust that just made Tony want to get out of the room. The promise of money was the only thing keeping him in his seat. "Mr. LaVelle wanted Xander to live up to his potential. The firm explained that he had no right to interfere with another man's family."
"Damn right," Tony exclaimed, happy that he could agree with something this lawyer was saying. However, now the lawyer had an even more disgusted look on his face.
"The firm helped him draft this document." Angel O'Connelly, Esquire pushed a thin stack of papers across the desk toward them. "Here is the short version. I am to have partial custody of Xander, including a say in medical and legal decisions and visitation rights." Tony opened his mouth to object to that but the lawyer just talked right over him. "And in return there is a trust fund set up to provide you with five thousand dollars a month."
"Five thousand? That's all?" Jessica asked quietly. Tony almost told her to shut up. He was the one who worked, and he knew how many overtime hours he had to put in for five thousand dollars.
"Five thousand a month for 15 months until Xander graduates, which is $75,000 dollars. There is an additional $10,000 for signing the custody paperwork today, and a $25,000 bonus after Xander's graduation provided that I sign off that you have been cooperative and helpful during this process." The lawyer smiled, but it wasn't a nice smile. It was like one of those men who just dare you to take a swing because they know they have a tire iron behind their back.
"And what exactly does cooperative mean?" Tony asked suspiciously.
"It means that you allow me to work with Xander. He lacks faith in his own abilities and his grades are only now starting to come up."
"He was never good with school," Jessica said apologetically.
"Then I will help him find something he is good at after he graduates; however, your only choice is to give me partial custody or to forfeit the inheritance." The lawyer opened a drawer, and given the man's expression, Tony tightened up wondering if he had a gun in there. Instead O'Connelly pulled out a bit of paper. He slid it across the desk, and Tony reached for it. It was a check. It was a $10,000 check. Damn that was a nice chunk of change, even if it wasn't enough to make Jessica happy.
Tony glanced over, and Jessica was chewing on her lower lip. The bitch was about to say something that would ruin this, he just knew it.
"Sign the papers," Tony told her.
"But Tony..."
"Sign."
"He's our son."
"This is your fucking cousin who set this up. Your family always has hated me, and now your fairy cousin is reaching out from the grave for his chance to poison Xander against hard work and honest living. Xander's smart enough to figure out that bullshit smells like bullshit, so I'm not worried about him. I am, however, worried that we don't have money for that new paint job for the house or that fancy wine you like to drink." Tony was proud of his ability to bribe and threaten his wife at the same time, and just like he expected, she crumbled under his attack. She quietly signed the papers. Tony followed, adding his scrawl to his wife's John Hancock before pushing the papers back over to the lawyer.
"The check is yours. To get the rest of the payments, you'll need to appear in front of a judge three weeks from tomorrow to have the papers finalized." Now the lawyer looked more relaxed. It looked like good old dead Destry had found himself a lawyer who cared about actually getting the job done. Every lawyer Tony'd ever talked to just wanted the fee up front.
"Oh," the lawyer said suddenly as though he'd just remembered something. "I have a business trip tomorrow; it lasts for a week. As a show of cooperation, I think you should allow Xander to accompany me so that we can get to know each other and work on his math grades. They've been dropping in the last two weeks."
"But..." Jessica started. Tony glared the woman into silence.
"That'd be fine, but if he needs clothes or food or something, I expect you can take care of that since he'll be in your custody."
"Agreed," the lawyer said as he stood up, and Tony got the feeling that the meeting was over. That was okay; he needed to get the check cashed anyway. And then he was going to call work and tell them he wouldn't be in for the rest of the day. A dead relative was reason enough for a well-deserved day off.
Tony stood up and held out his hand to his wife before he pulled her from the room. Today had worked out pretty damn good, all things considered. He might even hate Jessica's relatives a little less now... especially the dead ones. Dead was always good.
Angel watched the Harrises leave. He'd met slime demons he liked more than those two. Walking over to the window, he raised the shade and stood in the light of the window as he watched them walk to the curb, still talking. Mrs. Harris' hands were fluttering in front of her. Angel didn't know what was worse: Tony Harris' lack of concern or Mrs. Harris being concerned but not concerned enough to go to battle for her son. If Angel had been a pedophile, the Harrises would have just turned over a good deal of control to a monster. Technically, he now had 60% custody of Xander.
Fingering the Ring of Amara, Angel wondered what Spike would think when he came home and found out that $110,000 was gone from the accounts they'd set up from the other treasure that had been in the crypt with the ring. Oh, Spike wouldn't blink to spend that much on Xander, but he was going to be pissed that Angel had paid the Harrises off instead of just eating them. And Angel knew that he couldn't just claim that he wanted to protect Xander from the guilt of being friends with his parents' killer. With a fraction of that money, Angel could hire someone to kill the Harrises on some night when he had a solid alibi.
Spike wouldn't understand that Angel did it because of his soul, but he would just have to have another conversation with his childe. He'd helped cure Drusilla and he staked vampires and he paid off the Harrises all for the same reason: he thought it was the right thing to do. After centuries of killing, or, even worse, doing nothing, Angel was trying to make the right choices.
Of course, more and more he was finding that there was a dearth of right choices out there. He had to pick between bad and less bad. Kill Xander's parents, allow Xander's parents to ruin him, or give Xander's parents just enough money to seriously damage themselves. Angel was doing his best. By the time Spike wandered back to Sunnydale, he might even be able to see the natural consequences of two drunks being given too much money. That would amuse him. And when the money ran out... well, that was just going to be ugly. But at least their blood wasn't splattered across the wall.
Standing in the sun and feeling the warmth soak into his skin, Angel watched as the Harrises pulled away from the curb and headed back to their sad little lives with just enough money to encourage them to do such sad little things with those lives. And he didn't feel guilty at all.
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Date: 2008-06-20 12:11 am (UTC)Except...Go muse! Keep up the good work!!
:D
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:51 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-20 12:38 am (UTC)You know, for all that I think we see Xander's parents (maybe) twice in seven years, they sure generate a lot of fic.
And Spike's reaction when he sees the results will be priceless.
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Date: 2008-06-20 12:50 am (UTC)looking forward to the next installment as much as ever,
keep penning,
Marns
~pN
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:55 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-20 12:58 am (UTC)One tiny thing.
"So, you're Destry LaVelle's lawywer,"
I think I saw a thing or two in last night's story, but it was really late, and I was tired. I'll go check.
I love this series. I love it. I love it!
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-20 01:04 am (UTC)Xander's parents are pathetic, go Angel for stepping in!!!
I'm a Spike girl at heart, so I can't wait for him to wander back into this story, maybe when he does Xander's parents will get eaten after all?
*crosses fingers*
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:57 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-20 01:05 am (UTC)Welcome back to humanity, Angel *g*
I like how you portrayed the Harris'; I hate the plethora of Xander-gets-abused-by-his-dad fics, so just making them both slimy and selfish works for me, and works well in canon. Nice!
Now, having said all that; are you ever gonna get slashy?! Where's my mansex!! *gigglesnort*
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:59 am (UTC)And I never got the feeling from canon that his parents slapped him around/beat him/raped him, but the fact that they showed so little concern for his feelings or his safety certainly does suggest they sucked on the parenting scale.
And your mansex is going to have to wait. Xander is still firmly repressed, my dear.
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Date: 2008-06-20 01:08 am (UTC)But I am still reading every chapter. I think it's a great premise, and a really interesting take on Angel's character. Xander's family life inspires tons of fic, even though we hardly ever actually see anyone from his family. At this point I could not say what of what I know of his parents is canon vs. fanon. But I am finding your versions to be believable and horrible at the same time.
Please let the muse continue to be inspired here.
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Date: 2008-06-20 02:07 am (UTC)Like Angel would need a tire iron *snorts*
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Date: 2008-06-20 02:50 am (UTC)*loves*
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:16 am (UTC)Remind me to send your muse another box of Wheaties *g*
Shakatany
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:24 am (UTC)I think friends are better for him than lovers, in terms of emotional fullfillment without as much risk and pain (or danger). I was disappointed when they turned his and Cordy's relationship on ATS into romantic interest.
Spike's right, they should just eat Xander's parents. I think this is one of the few fics I've ever seen that has Jessica being almost as bad as Tony, in her way-she's not just a passive, saintly victim of his drunken rages, etc, she's an indifferent, greedy parent in her own right. One would make me flinch physically and the other, emotionally.
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Date: 2008-06-20 04:15 am (UTC)And you're right that Angel does better with friends than lovers, although I do hope to show Xander and Angel moving together in a healthy way once Xander is older... and less repressed.
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:49 am (UTC)*snerk*
I thought i was hallucinating when I saw this posted.
Your muse is awesome by the way.
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Date: 2008-06-20 05:44 am (UTC)I sniggered to myself at Angel's weariness when he denied that he was gay. I could almost hear him wondering if this was a uniquely Harris obsession, or more generally human. *g*
And Tony's final thought - Dead was always good made me laugh.
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Date: 2008-06-20 04:17 pm (UTC)And yes, Xander comes by his homophobia honestly. American males are pretty touchy, but the Harrises are an extra annoying version of that.
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Date: 2008-06-20 06:09 am (UTC)Dang... Poor Xander. I'm glad Angel has more custody now than they do. He cares about him more. *g*
I heart Angel more and more in this fic!
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Date: 2008-06-20 12:12 pm (UTC)I'm so glad you're keeping Xander and Cordelia together. :)
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Date: 2008-06-20 06:05 pm (UTC)only little error I noticed:
"she crumbled until his attack."
I think maybe you meant "under his attack"?
Great job. Cant wait for more.
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Date: 2008-06-20 06:49 pm (UTC)I will admit that I don't generally see the Harrises (Harris's ?) as being quite this nasty, but I don't have any problem with stories where they are. Heck, I even have an unhealthy liking of the occasional "horrifically abused!Xander" story.
Very nice little sideline interlude. The cover story was really well-crafted, and Angel did a good job pulling together the trappings of the rich and Wolfram&Hart-ish. He should keep that office for "just in case" moments in the future - unless everything was rented.
And, oh!, he's got the Ring of Amara!!! Excellent! Really really too cool. Now either he needs to stay clear of any road signs marked "Perfect Happiness", or Jenny Calendar needs to come clean about who she is and what her mission entails. Expecially since I'm all for live!Jenny.
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Date: 2008-06-21 03:41 pm (UTC)And yes, Angel has the ring, and you're right that Angel is still clueless about the happiness clause.
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Date: 2008-06-21 05:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-21 03:43 pm (UTC)