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Yep, two stories in two days. This muse must have eaten her Wheaties. In this universe, Xander challenged Angel right up front--called him a pedophile to his face. And from there, everything's changed.

Previous parts:
Part one: Bumbling to a Save
Part two: Family Ties
Part three: Devil in the Details
Part Four: Bad Karma
Part Five: Rust Upon Iron
Part Six: Mending Fences... or tearing them down
Part Seven: Quiet Waters Mirroring Undistorted

Bait, Swindle, and Self-destruct

After Willow and Buffy tried to visit Xander, his parents figured out that their son was spending more nights out than at home.  They put down their foot to keep him home, but now Angel is ready to put his foot down.  Xander doesn't have time to train, he isn't getting homework help, and the parents have just gotten in his way one time too many.





Tony Harris checked the name on the office against the notarized letter they'd received.

"Is this it?" Jessica asked, her eyes bright with excitement.

"Yep. And here I thought your family was good for nothing," he joked. The excitement in her eyes dulled for a second, and Tony let it drop. Her family were a bunch of stuck up assholes who had dropped her and her father quick enough when the old man had lost his money. If Tony hadn't stuck by Jessica after she got pregnant, they would have turned her out like yesterday's garbage. He had no idea why she insisted on sticking up for them. Yeah, his family had a couple of rotten apples hanging from the branches, but they weren't rotten at the root. And now, with Alexander hanging onto that rich bitch from school, he looked to be taking after his mother's side.

He pushed open the door and stopped short as a large man stood a foot inside. "Oh, hey, we got a letter," he said, holding the letter up. This guy was not looking like a lawyer. He looked more like that guy that Bruce had collect a few gambling debts.

"Mr. and Mrs. Harris?" he asked, holding out his hand. Tony surrendered the letter and the man took it before retreating behind a large desk. The name plate was brass: Angel O'Connelly, Esquire. That must have cost a pretty penny. Then again, the entire office smelled of money. Tony sank into a leather chair across from the lawyer, and Jessica followed a second later.

The lawyer leaned forward and clicked on a brass desk lamp, which seemed unnecessary since it was day, but heavy red curtains covered the windows. The whole room gave Tony that feeling he'd had when he'd egged his English teacher's car and gotten called into the principal's office.

"So, you're Destry LaVelle's lawyer," Tony said, trying to sound friendly. He didn't even make his normal jokes about the LaVelles' horrible taste in names. Alexander insisting on being called 'Xander'... that was all Jessica's fault. If he'd married a good solid girl, he would have gotten lots of kids with normal names, and they would have been on the football team or basketball team or some shit like that, too. "I thought old Destry died way back."

"He disappeared," Jessica said softly, not quite contradicting him.

"The matter of his will has only now come to my office," Mr. O'Connelly said as he leaned back. The man looked too young to be much of a lawyer, but his suit—like his office—stank of money, and Tony needed that money. Neither Jessica or Alexander were easy on his pocket, and California was an expensive state. "And the terms of Mr. LaVelle's will are rather specific."

"Specific?" Jessica asked, looking worried for the first time. "Specific about what?"

"About young Alexander," Mr. O'Connelly commented, steepling his fingers in front of him in a way that made Tony even more nervous. If that kid screwed up some inheritance, Tony was going to take it out of his hide. It was about time the kid started to work anyway. His old man always said that when a boy's old enough to go running around all night he's old enough to work all night. Besides, that would keep him away from that Donella bitch he was dating. No way did he want his son getting stuck marrying some bitch who would never let him forget that he would never make as much money as her late sainted father.

"Alexander's a wonderful young man," Jessica said with a big plastic smile. The lawyer didn't seem impressed.

"Mr. LaVelle was concerned that he not fall prey to the temptations that seem so common in today's young people," the lawyer said, and it was almost funny because with his spiky hair and build, he looked like he should be a running back for some college team, not a lawyer complaining the younger generation.

"Xander isn't into drugs or free sex or any of that. We've raised him with good morals and values," Jessica said, trotting out that old, tired 'aren't we a perfect family' routine of hers. But if there was money in the offering, Tony was a little more willing than usual to go along with her.

"Yes, well I made some inquiries on my own. I volunteered with the school and have spent several evenings tutoring Xander."

"You what?" Tony demanded. If this asshole tried to keep their money because Xander had said something, Tony was suing his ass off. "I never gave you permission to speak to my son."

"Then you're turning down the inheritance? I have that paper right here although I had not thought you would choose to turn down the money."

Jessica slid forward on her chair until she nearly tumbled out of it. "Turn down? We never turned down anything! Tony was just concerned that you didn't do anything to upset our Xander. He was particularly close to cousin Destry."

The lawyer raised an eyebrow and just stared at them while being perfectly still. Tony could swear the man wasn't even breathing.

"I didn't mean to say we'd turn down the money," Tony finally said, and that was the closest this asshole was getting to an apology. It seemed to be enough though. He nodded.

"Mr. LaVelle was very specific. He wanted Alexander to have access to an educated male to act as tutor and mentor."

"Mentor? That sounds like a fag," Tony said with a frown. He knew what older men wanted with boys, and his boy wasn't having nothing to do with that.

The lawyer sighed. "Mr. Harris, I assure you that I am not now nor have I ever been gay. And while I have no intentions of providing a history, the women in my past leave little doubt about my taste in sexual partners," he said with a sort of fancy disgust that just made Tony want to get out of the room. The promise of money was the only thing keeping him in his seat. "Mr. LaVelle wanted Xander to live up to his potential. The firm explained that he had no right to interfere with another man's family."

"Damn right," Tony exclaimed, happy that he could agree with something this lawyer was saying. However, now the lawyer had an even more disgusted look on his face.

"The firm helped him draft this document." Angel O'Connelly, Esquire pushed a thin stack of papers across the desk toward them. "Here is the short version. I am to have partial custody of Xander, including a say in medical and legal decisions and visitation rights." Tony opened his mouth to object to that but the lawyer just talked right over him. "And in return there is a trust fund set up to provide you with five thousand dollars a month."

"Five thousand? That's all?" Jessica asked quietly. Tony almost told her to shut up. He was the one who worked, and he knew how many overtime hours he had to put in for five thousand dollars.

"Five thousand a month for 15 months until Xander graduates, which is $75,000 dollars. There is an additional $10,000 for signing the custody paperwork today, and a $25,000 bonus after Xander's graduation provided that I sign off that you have been cooperative and helpful during this process." The lawyer smiled, but it wasn't a nice smile. It was like one of those men who just dare you to take a swing because they know they have a tire iron behind their back.

"And what exactly does cooperative mean?" Tony asked suspiciously.

"It means that you allow me to work with Xander. He lacks faith in his own abilities and his grades are only now starting to come up."

"He was never good with school," Jessica said apologetically.

"Then I will help him find something he is good at after he graduates; however, your only choice is to give me partial custody or to forfeit the inheritance." The lawyer opened a drawer, and given the man's expression, Tony tightened up wondering if he had a gun in there. Instead O'Connelly pulled out a bit of paper. He slid it across the desk, and Tony reached for it. It was a check. It was a $10,000 check. Damn that was a nice chunk of change, even if it wasn't enough to make Jessica happy.

Tony glanced over, and Jessica was chewing on her lower lip. The bitch was about to say something that would ruin this, he just knew it.

"Sign the papers," Tony told her.

"But Tony..."

"Sign."

"He's our son."

"This is your fucking cousin who set this up. Your family always has hated me, and now your fairy cousin is reaching out from the grave for his chance to poison Xander against hard work and honest living. Xander's smart enough to figure out that bullshit smells like bullshit, so I'm not worried about him. I am, however, worried that we don't have money for that new paint job for the house or that fancy wine you like to drink." Tony was proud of his ability to bribe and threaten his wife at the same time, and just like he expected, she crumbled under his attack. She quietly signed the papers. Tony followed, adding his scrawl to his wife's John Hancock before pushing the papers back over to the lawyer.

"The check is yours. To get the rest of the payments, you'll need to appear in front of a judge three weeks from tomorrow to have the papers finalized." Now the lawyer looked more relaxed. It looked like good old dead Destry had found himself a lawyer who cared about actually getting the job done. Every lawyer Tony'd ever talked to just wanted the fee up front.

"Oh," the lawyer said suddenly as though he'd just remembered something. "I have a business trip tomorrow; it lasts for a week. As a show of cooperation, I think you should allow Xander to accompany me so that we can get to know each other and work on his math grades. They've been dropping in the last two weeks."

"But..." Jessica started. Tony glared the woman into silence.

"That'd be fine, but if he needs clothes or food or something, I expect you can take care of that since he'll be in your custody."

"Agreed," the lawyer said as he stood up, and Tony got the feeling that the meeting was over. That was okay; he needed to get the check cashed anyway. And then he was going to call work and tell them he wouldn't be in for the rest of the day. A dead relative was reason enough for a well-deserved day off.

Tony stood up and held out his hand to his wife before he pulled her from the room. Today had worked out pretty damn good, all things considered. He might even hate Jessica's relatives a little less now... especially the dead ones. Dead was always good.




Angel watched the Harrises leave. He'd met slime demons he liked more than those two. Walking over to the window, he raised the shade and stood in the light of the window as he watched them walk to the curb, still talking. Mrs. Harris' hands were fluttering in front of her. Angel didn't know what was worse: Tony Harris' lack of concern or Mrs. Harris being concerned but not concerned enough to go to battle for her son. If Angel had been a pedophile, the Harrises would have just turned over a good deal of control to a monster. Technically, he now had 60% custody of Xander.

Fingering the Ring of Amara, Angel wondered what Spike would think when he came home and found out that $110,000 was gone from the accounts they'd set up from the other treasure that had been in the crypt with the ring. Oh, Spike wouldn't blink to spend that much on Xander, but he was going to be pissed that Angel had paid the Harrises off instead of just eating them. And Angel knew that he couldn't just claim that he wanted to protect Xander from the guilt of being friends with his parents' killer. With a fraction of that money, Angel could hire someone to kill the Harrises on some night when he had a solid alibi.

Spike wouldn't understand that Angel did it because of his soul, but he would just have to have another conversation with his childe. He'd helped cure Drusilla and he staked vampires and he paid off the Harrises all for the same reason: he thought it was the right thing to do. After centuries of killing, or, even worse, doing nothing, Angel was trying to make the right choices.

Of course, more and more he was finding that there was a dearth of right choices out there. He had to pick between bad and less bad. Kill Xander's parents, allow Xander's parents to ruin him, or give Xander's parents just enough money to seriously damage themselves. Angel was doing his best. By the time Spike wandered back to Sunnydale, he might even be able to see the natural consequences of two drunks being given too much money. That would amuse him. And when the money ran out... well, that was just going to be ugly. But at least their blood wasn't splattered across the wall.

Standing in the sun and feeling the warmth soak into his skin, Angel watched as the Harrises pulled away from the curb and headed back to their sad little lives with just enough money to encourage them to do such sad little things with those lives. And he didn't feel guilty at all.
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Date: 2008-06-20 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasonsnene.livejournal.com
Sigh. The Harrises are morons. Nuf said.

Except...Go muse! Keep up the good work!!

:D

Date: 2008-06-20 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
They are morons, but anyone who makes a house so miserable that their child would choose to sleep outside is a moron!

Date: 2008-06-20 12:38 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lillian13.livejournal.com
Oooh, Angel's letting his inner Angelus make suggestions, methinks. :-)

You know, for all that I think we see Xander's parents (maybe) twice in seven years, they sure generate a lot of fic.

And Spike's reaction when he sees the results will be priceless.

Date: 2008-06-20 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I'm glad you guys are approving of Angelus' little appearances. Angel isn't trying to impress the girl here, so he isn't as focused on being perfect. And when we do see the parents in canon, we know 1) they drink 2) they don't pay attention to what Xander's doing and 3) they fight so bad he sleeps outside on Christmas. It's not a Rockwell family moment in that house.

Date: 2008-06-20 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyvirgo1956.livejournal.com
Xander's parents just basically sold him to the highest bidder. I never did like them. And mentors are not gay. Where did Tony Harris come up with that twisted sense of logic. And Angel has the ring. That is so great. In canon instead of destroyong it he should have kept it. Granted Spike wanted it but so much good could have been done with it. So road trip is next. Looking forward to it. I do love this.

Date: 2008-06-20 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
For Tony Harris, any man with an interest in Xander must be gay because Xander is inherently uninteresting. And if someone had suggested that they sell Xander, they would have refused, but this legal dancing... based supposedly on a dead cousin's concern for Xander... has just the right touch of plausible deniablity for them.

Date: 2008-06-20 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bumpkin-is.livejournal.com
I liked this. A lot - so wonderfully conniving of Angel. His dark and lighter sides working together... and I loved that he justified it to the absent Spike - "you'll see Childe, just wait, and we'll still be lily white... heh." *g*

looking forward to the next installment as much as ever,
keep penning,
Marns
~pN

Date: 2008-06-20 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Angel is starting to listen to that inner voice that sounds a lot like Angelus, and it makes him a better "person." He is more complete with both his good and evil acknowledged. And yes, he can certainly justify the money spent to Spike.

Date: 2008-06-20 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaydee23.livejournal.com
Go Angel! Cool. Spike's definitely going to be pissed that Angel didn't eat them, but he's going to be glad that Angel has more influence over Xander.

One tiny thing.

"So, you're Destry LaVelle's lawywer,"

I think I saw a thing or two in last night's story, but it was really late, and I was tired. I'll go check.

I love this series. I love it. I love it!

Date: 2008-06-20 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Hopefully by the time Spike comes back, the Harrises will be well on their way to seriously damaging their livers and their reputations in the courts. And thanks for that catch.

Date: 2008-06-20 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spiceblueeyes.livejournal.com
Wow, two updates in one day, someone has been busy!
Xander's parents are pathetic, go Angel for stepping in!!!
I'm a Spike girl at heart, so I can't wait for him to wander back into this story, maybe when he does Xander's parents will get eaten after all?
*crosses fingers*

Date: 2008-06-20 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Every once in a while I just spurt the fic out. And yes, Xander's parents in canon and in fanon are serious losers. And Spike will come back into the story in the next school year, so you'll get your boy back.

Date: 2008-06-20 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anxiety-junkie.livejournal.com
Of course, more and more he was finding that there was a dearth of right choices out there. He had to pick between bad and less bad.

Welcome back to humanity, Angel *g*

I like how you portrayed the Harris'; I hate the plethora of Xander-gets-abused-by-his-dad fics, so just making them both slimy and selfish works for me, and works well in canon. Nice!

Now, having said all that; are you ever gonna get slashy?! Where's my mansex!! *gigglesnort*

Date: 2008-06-20 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
And that's exactly what I'm going for. Angel is rediscovering his humanity because he's not trying to hard to be a frikkin' ANGEL.

And I never got the feeling from canon that his parents slapped him around/beat him/raped him, but the fact that they showed so little concern for his feelings or his safety certainly does suggest they sucked on the parenting scale.

And your mansex is going to have to wait. Xander is still firmly repressed, my dear.

Date: 2008-06-20 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyivy.livejournal.com
Love, love, love this series. I don't comment on every chapter b/c work is kicking my a** right now and I am often too tired to deal with making coherent comments (and it is way too much work right now to think about going back to previous entries when I have some energy - really kicking my a**)

But I am still reading every chapter. I think it's a great premise, and a really interesting take on Angel's character. Xander's family life inspires tons of fic, even though we hardly ever actually see anyone from his family. At this point I could not say what of what I know of his parents is canon vs. fanon. But I am finding your versions to be believable and horrible at the same time.

Please let the muse continue to be inspired here.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I totally understand being under a time crunch, so no worries. And I'm really glad that you're enjoying where I'm going both with Angel's character (since he's the one who's really changing) and the relationship between Angel and Xander.

Date: 2008-06-20 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monjinator.livejournal.com
Oh, very tricky of Angel! I wonder what Xander will do when he finds out. But Xander's parents are so disgusting, I hope it all works out okay and they don't do anything else to muck him up.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I think Xander is going to be gobsmacked... both that Angel would bother to do this and that Angel would spend so much money.

Date: 2008-06-20 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devo79.livejournal.com
"It was like one of those men who just dare you to take a swing because they know they have a tire iron behind their back."

Like Angel would need a tire iron *snorts*

Date: 2008-06-20 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Yeah, exactly, but Tony has no idea how close he came to seeing death this day

Date: 2008-06-20 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mendenbar01.livejournal.com
Oh my! I have know parents who treat kids like personal property (a good friend is a social worker - one who really tries to do/get the best for the kids.) Well, if the Harris' drink themselves to destruction, I suspect it will only be what Xander expected.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Lots of bad parents do, and I think the Harrises will drink themselves to an early grave and that will be the end of that

Date: 2008-06-20 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kargrif.livejournal.com
ugh! what slime!! good on Angel, just giving them enough rope to hang themselves! yay!roadtrip!! lol, bring on the big rig!!

Date: 2008-06-20 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
And that's exactly what Angel is doing. He won't kill humans, but that's not to say he won't hand them a rope and stand back and watch!

Date: 2008-06-20 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strickens-girl.livejournal.com
Wow. That sure was tricky and devious, especially for Angel. I love that. This series is so great.

*loves*

Date: 2008-06-20 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
That was tricky and devious enough for Angelus, but restrained enough for Angel. The boy is learning some balance.

Date: 2008-06-20 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakatany.livejournal.com
For a change Angel really did some thinking and planning to come up with this scheme and the outcome may be worse for the Harrises than if he's let Angelus lose to deal with them. Also what a neat twist that in this 'verse he has the Gem of Amara. I think it'll come in very handy when they go up against the Mayor.

Remind me to send your muse another box of Wheaties *g*

Shakatany

Date: 2008-06-20 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Angelus was known for patience and planning, so it always seemed strange that Angel was so opposite... almost like he had a voice telling him the right way to handle things and so he did the opposite. Except late in A:tS, then he was just odd.

Date: 2008-06-20 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com
I like that Angel is actively trying to do things, not just following someone around worshipfully, or sitting around eating rats 'cause he's miserable and guilty.

I think friends are better for him than lovers, in terms of emotional fullfillment without as much risk and pain (or danger). I was disappointed when they turned his and Cordy's relationship on ATS into romantic interest.

Spike's right, they should just eat Xander's parents. I think this is one of the few fics I've ever seen that has Jessica being almost as bad as Tony, in her way-she's not just a passive, saintly victim of his drunken rages, etc, she's an indifferent, greedy parent in her own right. One would make me flinch physically and the other, emotionally.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Angel is learning to be his own man because if he's going to attach himself to Xander instead of Buffy, Xander will never take the lead.

And you're right that Angel does better with friends than lovers, although I do hope to show Xander and Angel moving together in a healthy way once Xander is older... and less repressed.

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Date: 2008-06-20 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delectiscent.livejournal.com
>>Tony could swear the man wasn't even breathing.
*snerk*


I thought i was hallucinating when I saw this posted.
Your muse is awesome by the way.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Tony is kinda clueless... it's that old Sunnydale blindness. And sometimes the fic just comes spurting out! So, that's a no on hallucination.

Date: 2008-06-20 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonjean2009.livejournal.com
Wow, Angel sounded a teeny bit Angelusy, I like it. And him having the Ring of Amara is lovely, I always wanted him to keep it. Love the way that you're updating this, hope the muse continue to be inspiring.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Angel has been letting his darker side out to play a little more. In canon, he didn't do that until LA, but he doesn't have a girl to impress here. And Angel will be keeping the ring this time.

Date: 2008-06-20 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com
Wow, another chapter so quickly. I'm not sure if this chapter says more about the Harrises characters or Angel's character, but I was too busy just enjoying the drama roll out to do much analysis. I think I'll dream about Angel being all Machievellian - it really does suit him *g*

Date: 2008-06-20 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed the drama. Angel needed to find a way to deal with the Harrises that would keep the soul and the demon happy. This works.

Date: 2008-06-20 05:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thismaz.livejournal.com
What a sneaky way to get the Harrises to basically sell Xander, without having to admit it to themselves. This is certainly the Angelus aspect of Angel in action, because his mind-games were his real evil trait. And Angel using that skill for his purposes, fully aware of his choices is very nice to see. He's not going to kill them *g* he's going to give them the opportunity to commit suicide. Spike will approve of the technique, when he see the results.
I sniggered to myself at Angel's weariness when he denied that he was gay. I could almost hear him wondering if this was a uniquely Harris obsession, or more generally human. *g*
And Tony's final thought - Dead was always good made me laugh.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
That's just it, Angel gave them plausible deniability. If anyone asks, Angel is just a mentor that dear cousin Destry willed to Xander to make sure the boy grows up right. Nothing fishy there... nope. And they are going to seriously self-destruct with that much money. And if they don't self-destruct before Xander graduates, losing the money will pretty much do it.

And yes, Xander comes by his homophobia honestly. American males are pretty touchy, but the Harrises are an extra annoying version of that.

Date: 2008-06-20 06:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xenachakram12.livejournal.com
More?? It's like Christmas!! *pets your muse*

Dang... Poor Xander. I'm glad Angel has more custody now than they do. He cares about him more. *g*

I heart Angel more and more in this fic!

Date: 2008-06-20 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you're enjoying the spurt. Xander doesn't have the worst home life by any stretch of the imagination, but Angel certainly is the better guardian at this point. And I'm glad you're enjoying Angel here.

Date: 2008-06-20 12:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] texanfan.livejournal.com
Planting the seeds for Tony and Jessica to destroy themselves. That's got some of Angelus' "artistry" that does. I like it. I wonder how Xander's going to react to this little arrangement?

I'm so glad you're keeping Xander and Cordelia together. :)

Date: 2008-06-20 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Angel is letting his Angelus side out more here. In canon, that didn't happen until the move to LA, so I'm going off the theory that the early Angel was all wussy because he was trying to impress the girl. Well, no more. And Xander may murder Angel... we'll have to see.

Date: 2008-06-20 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah0832.livejournal.com
What a great story! I love how a small tweak in cannon has become such a rich, involved story. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2008-06-20 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. This has been fun to write because the changes are piling up.

Date: 2008-06-20 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teezer.livejournal.com
yay really enjoying this story. I alway enjoy the interaction of Xander and Angel. A smart move on Angels part to get Xander to be able to go with him without too many people wondering why. I dont think Xander is going to like him paying them off either. Just threaten them with child abuse and neglect charges. That should work.

only little error I noticed:

"she crumbled until his attack."

I think maybe you meant "under his attack"?

Great job. Cant wait for more.

Date: 2008-06-20 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Oh, Xander's going to be more than a little hacked, but it won't change the fact that Angel now has some control over Xander's life, and Angel is all about the control. And thanks for that catch.

Date: 2008-06-20 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com
Okay, now you've gone "too far" *grin* - Angel's showing actual intelligence here! And sneakiness and ability to plan!!

I will admit that I don't generally see the Harrises (Harris's ?) as being quite this nasty, but I don't have any problem with stories where they are. Heck, I even have an unhealthy liking of the occasional "horrifically abused!Xander" story.

Very nice little sideline interlude. The cover story was really well-crafted, and Angel did a good job pulling together the trappings of the rich and Wolfram&Hart-ish. He should keep that office for "just in case" moments in the future - unless everything was rented.

And, oh!, he's got the Ring of Amara!!! Excellent! Really really too cool. Now either he needs to stay clear of any road signs marked "Perfect Happiness", or Jenny Calendar needs to come clean about who she is and what her mission entails. Expecially since I'm all for live!Jenny.

Date: 2008-06-21 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Angel is listening to his inner Angelus, and we all know that Angelus was always sneakier and smarter than Angel. And as for the Harrises, I don't think they're egregiously horrible people... I don't think they would give custody to a perfect stranger, but this story allows them to feel like this is family interfering, and family paying for the right to interfere.

And yes, Angel has the ring, and you're right that Angel is still clueless about the happiness clause.

Date: 2008-06-21 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bookworm-2005.livejournal.com
Oh, just lovely. I love what Angel did here. It's not exactly moral, but it's not immoral, either. He basically gave the Harris' the tools for their own destruction, but put the responsibility directly into their own hands. So perfectly evil. He gave them the poison cup, but they drank of their own free will. Beautiful. And so human. It's nice to see Angel stepping out of his saint role and becoming more flawed and real.

Date: 2008-06-21 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. You're right that Angel is walking a thin moral line here, but he is not actually damaging them. I mean, if someone offered us 5000 for a little over a year, we'd be grateful and have a nice little nest egg at the end. It's not Angel's fault the Harrises are self-destructive. And yeah, it's a very human solution.
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