Date: 2006-01-20 09:27 am (UTC)
Can't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed that chapter. Very powerful fight between Leshar and Spike, typical that Leshar still thinks he could trade of Xander's ingrained fear response to make him obey - just show's how much the boy has grown and rearranged himself.

I'm glad you let Xan kill his nightmare both literally and symbolically and by doing it cleanly hopefully he stops the cycle.

I've enjoyed this story so much and can't wait for the epilogues you've got planned. I would like to see the boys dealing with the pregnant girl, but I won't second guess your plans, but I will enjoy the results.

great writing, terrific story, gorgeous boys = happy sparrow!
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