Re-re-reading is *so* much fun! I'm zooming thorugh this.
Wee fixes: 'the spirit animals of Shaman and Sentinels' ... 'Shamen' 'Shaman aren't saints' ... 'Shamen' 'Why don't you try reading that file again," Xander asked' ... needs a question mark the inside out swim team members." ... no quote mark needed here "Nothing," ... should be a full stop
Learning Curve 5,6,7
Date: 2007-12-17 02:08 pm (UTC)Wee fixes:
'the spirit animals of Shaman and Sentinels' ... 'Shamen'
'Shaman aren't saints' ... 'Shamen'
'Why don't you try reading that file again," Xander asked' ... needs a question mark
the inside out swim team members." ... no quote mark needed here
"Nothing," ... should be a full stop