Oh that was just yummy. I love that you've still got them being all fumbly and awkward about the sex. They're like a couple of teenagers, and having the light out was hysterical.
I really like that you'e showing the need they have for each other but at the same time showing that they aren't quite sure exactly of what they're doing to fulfil that need. It rings much truer than everything being perfect because first times normally aren't. It's so funny when Blair gets frustrated with Jim going in BP mode while he's got 2 fingers up Blair's backside. They may be experienced men, but this is new territory and very exciting it is too!
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Date: 2005-11-19 02:56 pm (UTC)I really like that you'e showing the need they have for each other but at the same time showing that they aren't quite sure exactly of what they're doing to fulfil that need. It rings much truer than everything being perfect because first times normally aren't. It's so funny when Blair gets frustrated with Jim going in BP mode while he's got 2 fingers up Blair's backside. They may be experienced men, but this is new territory and very exciting it is too!