"No, I'm sorry," Cordelia added. "You're just looking so good with the trim fighting form and the muscles and the gorgeous curls that you're obviously using conditioner on, not to mention the vast improvement on your wardrobe... I mean, I just forgot," she trailed off plaintively.
That was just great:-)
You see a lot of Xander and Willow babble, but few attempt the subtle and highly rarified form of the classic Cordy-babble.
The whole interchange with Spike and Cordy was great. Really in character for both of them.
I really like the fact that you're not trying to go the route of "Spike's magical healing penis" that comes along so often. You're showing a long and gruelling and possibly endless road to healing that is appropriate for the world you've created.
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Date: 2005-11-12 01:03 am (UTC)That was just great:-)
You see a lot of Xander and Willow babble, but few attempt the subtle and highly rarified form of the classic Cordy-babble.
The whole interchange with Spike and Cordy was great. Really in character for both of them.
I really like the fact that you're not trying to go the route of "Spike's magical healing penis" that comes along so often. You're showing a long and gruelling and possibly endless road to healing that is appropriate for the world you've created.
More please:-)