Date: 2005-11-07 01:01 pm (UTC)
""Right then, that’s one job left in this bloody town, and then we can go home," Spike said with an edge of nervousness in his voice. Xander wondered what the one job was that produced such an unusual emotion in his bad-ass Master. However, it wasn't really his place to question, and so he followed behind silent and sated."

You do love leaving us with that "uh-oh" feeling don't you?!

The sex was definitely needed here, especially after the emotional wringing of the past two chapters. So very hot, with the public display as well. Having Xander finish himself off is quite revealing. At first he wasn't sure if he could do it, very much a bit of old Xander there! (but of course he could!) Spike supporting him as always. I enjoyed the comparison to Calsha's slave, him sitting still and Spike approving when Xander couldn't hold still despite his training, even egging Xander on, encouraging him...

"They all want you. They all want you, and they can never ever touch you. I'd bloody break them into a thousand pieces if they so much as looked at you wrong." Spike's words sent another shiver of lust over Xander, and he decided that it didn't matter who was watching."

That was very intense. To me, that was our boys' version of a heartfelt, "I love you." Even more intense.

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