I know I'm not first, but I'm so thrilled, thrilled, thrilled with the third chapter. ^_^ Especially with Xander making it a point to confront Dawn about some of her behavior. And then him making damn sure that Spike was included in the protection of the spell, and wanting to make sure that he was being taken care of.
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"Okay, am I the only one who things this is a monumentally bad idea?" things -> thinks
Tara suggested. There are some protection and warding spells far more powerful than the traditional ones, but they're dangerous. There are missing quotation marks there.
There were all kinds of lines I squeed over re-reading this (including the line with Spike reflecting on this being the second time that he had used Xander's bondage skills, and that Xander pretty much admitted to being raped by Faith), but I'll leave that for now. With three chapters in one day, I imagine you're a bit tuckered out. *hugs* You did beautiful.
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"Okay, am I the only one who things this is a monumentally bad idea?" things -> thinks
Tara suggested. There are some protection and warding spells far more powerful than the traditional ones, but they're dangerous. There are missing quotation marks there.
There were all kinds of lines I squeed over re-reading this (including the line with Spike reflecting on this being the second time that he had used Xander's bondage skills, and that Xander pretty much admitted to being raped by Faith), but I'll leave that for now. With three chapters in one day, I imagine you're a bit tuckered out. *hugs* You did beautiful.