I'm finally catching up on this amazing series you've written. I know it's a WIP, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the chapters that have been written so far. Awesome stuff!
A couple of things I noticed:
"She'd start full of conflicts and hurt, but he'd erase that... make her feel alive and whole and dominate." Did you mean dominant?
"He'd hear about that later, but not until Buffy was hot and stated, her limp body lying across his." Did you mean sated?
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Date: 2010-09-09 07:55 am (UTC)A couple of things I noticed:
"She'd start full of conflicts and hurt, but he'd erase that... make her feel alive and whole and dominate." Did you mean dominant?
"He'd hear about that later, but not until Buffy was hot and stated, her limp body lying across his." Did you mean sated?