I'm glad you like that line. Jack isn't seeing a sentinel. I don't think he really gives a shit one way or the other. What he sees is a soldier who got damn creative and found a way around a lot of enemy traps. He definitely wants Jim on his team.
I worried about the POV shift, but this part of the story really did require Jim's perspective.
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Date: 2010-01-15 05:18 am (UTC)I worried about the POV shift, but this part of the story really did require Jim's perspective.