Oh, I'm liking this a lot! Love the way you're bringing them together, they fit just perfectly into this 'verse,and I can't wait to read the next part.
I just read all three parts together, so I didn't think to say anything after Part Two, but that was one of the best examples of Jim using his senses I've ever read. I'm not a big TS fan, but I have friends who are, and so mostly I just read occasional crossovers and recs from them, but I really loved your descriptions of how Jim used his senses, not just in the sex scene, but all the way through - the way he felt like he could almost "become" the ship, and even expand beyond it, and the way he could focus down onto such small details like the whorls in Blair's fingertips. Very descriptive, and quite enjoyable.
Ummm...so you know...I'm missing Kin something terrible, but now that you've got NaNoWriMo out of the way, I've got my fingers crossed that you'll feel the muse move you back in that direction soon. In the meantime, though, this is a great way to keep me occupied!
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Date: 2009-12-08 10:11 pm (UTC)I just read all three parts together, so I didn't think to say anything after Part Two, but that was one of the best examples of Jim using his senses I've ever read. I'm not a big TS fan, but I have friends who are, and so mostly I just read occasional crossovers and recs from them, but I really loved your descriptions of how Jim used his senses, not just in the sex scene, but all the way through - the way he felt like he could almost "become" the ship, and even expand beyond it, and the way he could focus down onto such small details like the whorls in Blair's fingertips. Very descriptive, and quite enjoyable.
Ummm...so you know...I'm missing Kin something terrible, but now that you've got NaNoWriMo out of the way, I've got my fingers crossed that you'll feel the muse move you back in that direction soon. In the meantime, though, this is a great way to keep me occupied!