Wow, I liked the way we saw everybody choosing sides. The pain being felt by them all was almost palpable!
Mind you, I wanted to slap Jenny Calendar for dismissing Xander's contribution over the past few years! Cow!
The Xander/Willow talk hurt! She was just so overbearing! I'm glad Xander was able to stand up against Willow's guilt causing eyes!
Wee fixes: - sorry that you've chose to avoid that future [chosen] - not at the reminded of Spike's demonic traits [reminder] - Jenny looked just uncomfortable [Jenny just looked uncomfortable] sounds better this way around - Oz was her girlfriend [boyfriend] - the red out of her hair so that it look mousy. [looked] - However, right now being mean is feeling a slightly good. [feeling slightly]
Kin Of The Soul 7
Date: 2009-04-04 10:30 pm (UTC)Mind you, I wanted to slap Jenny Calendar for dismissing Xander's contribution over the past few years! Cow!
The Xander/Willow talk hurt! She was just so overbearing! I'm glad Xander was able to stand up against Willow's guilt causing eyes!
Wee fixes:
- sorry that you've chose to avoid that future [chosen]
- not at the reminded of Spike's demonic traits [reminder]
- Jenny looked just uncomfortable [Jenny just looked uncomfortable] sounds better this way around
- Oz was her girlfriend [boyfriend]
- the red out of her hair so that it look mousy. [looked]
- However, right now being mean is feeling a slightly good. [feeling slightly]