Mountain Prey
Aug. 27th, 2011 09:01 amLet's try this again. Livejournal is being bitchy today.
Despite the fact I have a half-dozen originals already started, I think this may be my next. What do you guys (honestly) think?
Mountain Prey
Stunt Folger has a good life as a forestry technician. He can tend his beloved Appalachian mountains by day and drive to the city when he needs a little kinky fun. Other than a few moonshiners who just hate federal employees for philosophical reasons, he doesn't have a problem in the world. However, walking the trails puts him in the center of danger when he runs into Justin Soto, a man out for revenge. Just out of prison, Justin knows first hand that the justice system doesn't treat poor and rich equally, so when he sets his sights on avenging his brother's death, he goes outside the law. However, when an innocent man lands in the middle of his plans, he doesn't know what to do... other than take him hostage. And sadly, that's only the start of how strange this adventure is about to get.
( Chapter One )
( Chapter Two )
Let me know what you think because now is the time to tweak the characters and/or hook.
Despite the fact I have a half-dozen originals already started, I think this may be my next. What do you guys (honestly) think?
Mountain Prey
Stunt Folger has a good life as a forestry technician. He can tend his beloved Appalachian mountains by day and drive to the city when he needs a little kinky fun. Other than a few moonshiners who just hate federal employees for philosophical reasons, he doesn't have a problem in the world. However, walking the trails puts him in the center of danger when he runs into Justin Soto, a man out for revenge. Just out of prison, Justin knows first hand that the justice system doesn't treat poor and rich equally, so when he sets his sights on avenging his brother's death, he goes outside the law. However, when an innocent man lands in the middle of his plans, he doesn't know what to do... other than take him hostage. And sadly, that's only the start of how strange this adventure is about to get.
( Chapter One )
( Chapter Two )
Let me know what you think because now is the time to tweak the characters and/or hook.