Ooooh, I like any universe where Jim&Blair get to work with SG1. *colour me happy* :-)
Wee fixes: Jim chuckled and large hands tracing some pattern [traced] as she thrust out the pile into Blair's arm [thrust the]
you use both Ph.D. and PhD, need to standardise on one of them
panic on a mission, even for second, [a second] Jack was being frightening logical [frighteningly] if you don't take this seriously. [seriously."] on that assumption. [assumption?]
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Shadows And Siege 19
Date: 2008-05-07 10:05 am (UTC)Wee fixes:
Jim chuckled and large hands tracing some pattern [traced]
as she thrust out the pile into Blair's arm [thrust the]
you use both Ph.D. and PhD, need to standardise on one of them
panic on a mission, even for second, [a second]
Jack was being frightening logical [frighteningly]
if you don't take this seriously. [seriously."]
on that assumption. [assumption?]