*bounces with Jack love* Ummmm Jack! I loves Jack!
*is gleeful for Jack and Daniel snark*
I *love love love* the similarities in Blair/Daniel's reactions to sitting down next to each other. Loved that Jim was repeating Jack and Daniel's conversation... did he do it inflections and all?
The UST between Jim and Blair is soooo strong and so painful. We can see Blair being all distracted by Jim, I'd love to see the other POV where it is Jim who is manfully trying to do his job instead of throwing Blair to the ground and having his oh-so-wonderfully-wicked way with him. Especially when he can practically *taste* the pheromones from Blair's arousal
I just wish that Jack/Daniel had stumbled upon Jim/Blair and Jim/Blair had to kiss and make out like crazy with Blair to give another reason for why Jim might be there with Blair! But that's a cliche for a different a story! :-)
Oh and mega brownie points for getting in a Get Smart reference in here. I looooved that show.
Wee fixes: and Jim senses were being [Jim's] locked the flimsy little latch [latch.] Maybe we should call someone, [someone?] which is more than Blair [which was] into a sunken entry way [entryway] The thought made him want to laugh, and for a second [laugh and, for a second] I'm not surprised he recognizes me [recognized] and Jim reaction confirmed it [Jim's] Sentinel instinct existed [instincts] had put Jim on high alert, but for all [alert but, for]
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Shadows And Siege 6
Date: 2008-03-23 04:06 am (UTC)*is gleeful for Jack and Daniel snark*
I *love love love* the similarities in Blair/Daniel's reactions to sitting down next to each other.
Loved that Jim was repeating Jack and Daniel's conversation... did he do it inflections and all?
The UST between Jim and Blair is soooo strong and so painful. We can see Blair being all distracted by Jim, I'd love to see the other POV where it is Jim who is manfully trying to do his job instead of throwing Blair to the ground and having his oh-so-wonderfully-wicked way with him. Especially when he can practically *taste* the pheromones from Blair's arousal
I just wish that Jack/Daniel had stumbled upon Jim/Blair and Jim/Blair had to kiss and make out like crazy with Blair to give another reason for why Jim might be there with Blair! But that's a cliche for a different a story! :-)
Oh and mega brownie points for getting in a Get Smart reference in here. I looooved that show.
Wee fixes:
and Jim senses were being [Jim's]
locked the flimsy little latch [latch.]
Maybe we should call someone, [someone?]
which is more than Blair [which was]
into a sunken entry way [entryway]
The thought made him want to laugh, and for a second [laugh and, for a second]
I'm not surprised he recognizes me [recognized]
and Jim reaction confirmed it [Jim's]
Sentinel instinct existed [instincts]
had put Jim on high alert, but for all [alert but, for]