What? You were utterly right. I needed to clarify that. But that's why I like writing WIP style because no amount of editing on my part would have caught that because it *was* clear in my head. However, the story doesn't live in everyone else's head, which would be the point of using words. And clear words are usually better. So thank you for the comments.
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Date: 2008-01-21 09:56 pm (UTC)