lit_gal ([personal profile] lit_gal) wrote2010-03-13 09:43 pm

Magnificent Seven

Magnificent Seven--The Tucson Team

I have had some crossover ideas for The Sentinel and Magnificent Seven bouncing around my head. However, I had a couple of issues. First, I don't want to use the original time period of M7. The Old West is not my schtick. Second, I don't want to use the widely accepted and recognized ATF AU where the team is a crack unit of the ATF. I just can't see Ezra becoming a cop, and that doesn't really match how I see Josiah or J.D. or even Nathan.

Yeah, so that leaves me having to create my own mythology for these guys. That means that these seven are essentially original characters because they are only inspired by the Magnificent Seven guys. So, I am introducing the Tucson variation of M7 just so that IF I write that crossover later, ya'll know who the hell these people are. Oh, and I promise to introduce them one at a time (just like original characters), so I don't leave you going wtfffff??

So, on with the story

Title: Sunstroke, Insanity, and Faith
Genre: Gen... an introduction to the characters before I do much with them.
Fandom: Magnificent Seven
Taming the Muse prompt: Gentrification

Summary: An  undercover cop finds himself in deeper than he ever expected when a local priest hires him to defend the church in an all out gang-war.





"Vincent Tanner?" a voice asked.

Vin turned to look at the older gentleman who had said his full name. "My momma called me that. Most everyone else calls me Vin."

The man nodded. "Vin. Old Norse from the Latin vinum or wine," he commented.

Ah, that's where Vin knew him. The gangs he was supposed to be investigating had a bad habit of running illegal immigrants across the border and then holding them hostage while demanding a ransom out of the illegal immigrant's family. It was a good racket because these people did not call the police. Vin had been undercover for almost two months now and he was just starting to identify all the players. This was Josiah Sanchez. Some of the locals hated him—called him Father Joe behind his back and said that he was some sort of wanna-be priest while making dirty little comments about how he probably just wanted access to the little Catholic boys. But most of the neighborhood treated him like some sort of holy man. Vin leaned back against the bench and looked up. "Josiah, right?" he asked.

"That I am." The man sat down next to Vin, and for the first time, Vin realized just how large a man Josiah Sanchez was. Vin hadn't spent too much time around the guy, not after he'd decided that Josiah wasn't hooked up with the gangs. He was one of the few locals who weren't. "I thought I might invite you to spend some time at the church this week."

Vin frowned. This was a very odd conversation. "You want me to come to church?" Vin's cover wasn't all that far off from his real personality. He was a hothead with a record for burglary and drug dealing and suspected of murder back in Texas. The burglary part was true enough—Vin had done some pretty questionable things in his youth, although Tucson PD didn't know about it. Being a hothead? Vin wasn't even going to deny that. He sometimes wished that he looked rougher. Men like Josiah who had that gruff, weathered look weren't hassled, but Vin was, unfortunately, cute. That wasn't a word a man really wanted to hear used to describe him. It meant men gave him shit and Vin had to give it right back. Ironically, the unsubstantiated murder charge was pretty close to the truth, too. Vin's police partner back in Fort Worth had tried to pin a murder on Vin to stop some uncomfortable questions about bribery. That's why he'd left Texas and taken a detective position in Tucson, which had about the worst crime stats in this part of the world.  About the only part of Vin's cover that wasn't both highly defamatory and true was the part about the drugs.

Vin scratched his neck where the Tucson sun was making him sweat. Josiah remained silent as he watched the traffic rumble past them. "Is there some reason why I would come to church?" Vin asked.

"Other than your soul?" Josiah gave him a crooked smile.

"Yes, other than my soul. I'm actually not all that worried about my soul." Vin rolled his eyes. God help him; the missionary thought Vin was a street thug who needed saving. Well, that did suggest his cover was working.

Josiah leaned back on the bus bench and looked up into the blue sky for a long time... long enough that he had to be seeing spots. Whatever this guy was up to, he was one seriously odd duck. Vin stretched so that his hand just happened to land near enough his waist band for him to pull his weapon if he needed to.

"That's why I'd like you to visit the church," Josiah said without taking his eyes off the sky. "You're a man who relies on himself and his own weapon, but you aren't a man who's quick to pull it. Down here, that's rare." Josiah slowly looked down at Vin, studying him with such intensity that Vin had to work to avoid squirming under the older man's gaze.

"Weapon?"

Josiah shook his head as if Vin had said something amusing. "This may not be much, but hopefully it can hire you for a few days." Josiah reached for his pocket, and Vin tensed up. This wasn't worth blowing his cover and losing two month of undercover work, but this guy was seriously creeping him out. Instead of a weapon, Josiah pulled out a turquoise necklace and tossed it at him. Vin caught the piece, and opened his mouth to answer, but Josiah was already ambling down the street. There were very few people Vin would ever apply the word 'amble' to, but Josiah ambled. Actually, come to think of it, he was the only man Vin had ever seen amble.

Looking down at his hand, he studied the piece. It was mostly inlaid turquoise, but up close, Vin could see bands of coral and mother of pearl in a Native American design. It was an abstract image of a man bend over until his body created a half-circle. This was worth something... a lot of something. And for some reason, Vin did not feel like handing it over to his bosses. Some Native woman had probably asked Josiah to use it to hire someone. The Tohonoa O'odham, Pascua Yaqui, and Ak-Chin reservations were all within spitting distance and the San Carlos Apaches and Zuni weren’t far off either. The piece looked Zuni. And the Native People seemed to have the same respect for Josiah that most of the Hispanic and homeless population did. Someone sent Josiah out with the only payment they could manage.

"I seriously hope you aren't into something too dangerous." Vin rubbed his thumb over the beautiful piece before he dropped it into his shirt pocket. Getting up, Vin wandered in the opposite direction. He needed to drop his handler a note and let them know he had been invited over to the church for some reason. Hell, maybe if some of the gangs' victims were looking to hire protection, Vin could find something to help him break this case. He was tired of dangling out here without anyone to watch his back.



Josiah's church was in a run-down neighborhood with little square houses that had been thrown up during World War II, but the church itself was much older. The front had tall, narrow windows and the church bell, still suspended from a huge beam, had left rust stains that ran down the white adobe. The only large window was a large round window three stories up and directly above the massive wooden doors. The plaque out front gave the church's history. Built in 1732, it just about fell down in 1860. From the research Vin's boss had sent him, it had almost fallen down again in 1970 from neglect, but Josiah Sanchez had shown up straight out of the Vietnam war and declared himself the unofficial caretaker. Without asking anyone's permission, he moved into the historical landmark and started fixing it up with his own two hands.

It took four years for the city to notice that the man had basically rebuilt and restored the entire site, and by that time, Josiah was feeding the poor out of the back and giving informal prayer sessions in the main room, which hadn't actually been used as a church in a hundred years. When Tucson tried to evict their unofficial employee, the entire neighborhood had risen up in rebellion. Police couldn't even drive their cars to the church because of the mob in the street, so the city threw up their hands and just ignored Josiah. Vin's captain had been very vocal about the fact that Josiah had more influence in this area than anyone wanted to admit.

Hopefully Captain Rodriguez had been right about this guy not doing anything immoral, because Vin was about to walk into the lion's den. Pushing open the carved front doors, Vin walked into the main room. His boots echoed on the tile floor, and pews with hand carved details were lined up and facing the front. "Hello?" Vin's voice echoed. The door slowly fell closed again, and the light from the window made a giant oval as it fell on the tile floor. "Is anyone here?" Vin walked toward the front, but no one seemed to be home.

"Hey, we're back here," a voice yelled. It wasn't Josiah, but Vin followed it through another door into a long hallway. This part of the structure was clearly newer. The exposed beams and rough adobe gave way to drywall and electric lights.

"J.D., do be careful with that. This is a historical landmark."

"I'm not touching the history. I'm only ripping out drywall, Josiah." The speaker sounded young, late teens or early twenties maybe.

"The drywall is attached to history." A loud crash made Vin flinch as he came into a room full of long tables. A few people sat playing cards, and even without the extra clothes that marked the homeless in colder climates, Vin could spot them. They weren't exactly clean and one carried a jacket that seemed a little out of place when the thermometer was hitting 110. On the far side of the room, Josiah was standing over a young man with shaggy black hair and a sheepish look on his face.

"I'll fix it," the kid promised, holding his hands up as if he could hold Josiah off. That was actually kind of funny because this J.D. was about half Josiah's size. Vin knew he was exaggerating a bit but the kid wasn't anywhere near Josiah's league. On the floor, a broken piece of drywall had two strips of lathing still clinging to it.

Josiah shook his head and turned his back to the kid. The second Josiah's back was turned, the kid gave the two homeless men a cheeky grin, and one laughed. "He's going to take a switch to you soon or later," the man warned.

"Hey, I'm an adult. You don't take switches to adults," J.D. protested. If he was claiming to be an adult, that probably meant he was at least eighteen, but Vin was guessing he couldn't be too much more than that.

"You came." Josiah wiped drywall dust off his hands. His toolbelt hung low on his hips, but Vin frowned at one particularly odd shape.

"Is that a .22?"

Josiah's hand fell on the end of the gun he'd tucked between his hammer and a tape measure. "The lord provides, but I find that sometimes I have to fill in a few gaps where his provisions fall short of my preferences," Josiah offered. Vin's eyebrows went up. The odd factor was definitely not going away. "Would you like some lunch?"

Vin ignored him and watched as J.D. struggled to get what looked like metal sheeting bolted to the studs. His drill screamed as the torque on the bolt drove it into the heavy wood.

Josiah sighed. "You are overreacting."

"No, I’m reacting," J.D. argued. "Besides, you went and got him, didn't you?" J.D. put down his drill and walked over with his hand out. "J.D. Dunne. I help out around the mission."

"Vin Tanner," Vin responded, but his attention was focused on the wall. One wall was a roadmap of spackle and joint tape, and the wall J.D. was working on had metal sheeting covering the bottom third.

"Are you armor plating the room?" Vin asked.

J.D. smiled. "Exactly. See, I told you this was a good idea." J.D. rapped his knuckles against the metal. Stepping forward, Vin ran his hand along the plate. Half-inch steel behind a solid wall would stop most things, but the question was, who did they plan to go to war against.

"I didn't say it wouldn't work. What I said was that the bullet deflection was going to tear the exterior to shreds," Josiah said.

"He's right about that," Vin said as he craned his neck to see into the space between the studs where J.D. had pulled out the insulation. "Something goes ricocheting off that metal, and it's going to rip through your electrical wire, studs, plywood... everything that's on the outside of this plate."

"Yeah, but that won't be us because we'll be inside," J.D. pointed out.

"And who's going to be out there?" Vin poked a thumb toward the back of the mission. If he had to take a stand somewhere, he'd rather take it in the main church where the narrow windows and thick walls would be just as effective as a fort as it had been in the 1700's. This more modern addition had standard 6 by 4 foot windows on two walls and standard walls. At least the walls had been standard before J.D.'s little project.

"East Side Los Cuatro Milpas," J.D. blithely announced. Bending over, he grabbed his drill and slipped another bolt into the attachment.

Vin looked over at Josiah for some sort of denial. Phoenix had driven many of the gang members out, and a large contingent had landed in Tucson. As they tried to wrestle territory away from the other gangs, the violence had escalated. They were the main reason Vin was undercover in this neighborhood.

"You pissed off the East Side Los Cuatro Milpas?" Vin asked.

Josiah shrugged. "I shared the truth," he said raising his arms in a helpless shrug.

One of the homeless men snorted. "Yeah, only his truth included the fact that if they threatened any more of Josiah's people, Josiah was going to take one of their semiautomatic weapons and 'introduce it to their internal organs via that most convenient orifice.' Funniest thing I ever saw." The man did a pretty good imitation of Josiah, but Vin was a little more concerned about a potential bloodbath. A half inch of steel was not going to stop the gang-bangers from shooting someone as he walked down the street.

"I was simply warning them of the consequences of remaining on the life path they had chosen for themselves," Josiah offered sweetly. J.D.'s drill whined as his put in another bolt.

"Wait," Vin said. "You hired me to go to war with the East Side Los Cuatro Milpas? That's why you asked me here?"

Josiah just looked at him in a way that made it patently clear that's exactly what he wanted.

"You do know this is crazy, right? You, me and a kid against the East Side Los Cuatro Milpas? We can save money with the group rate on funerals."

"If that's God's will."

"Have you considered that God's will might be for us to go to the police?" Vin asked. Yeah, his cover story did not mesh well with someone who suggested running to the cops, but this was the East Side Los Cuatro Milpas. Even a low-level dealer and thug would run for the cops if he had them on his tail.

"Considered it." Josiah nodded thoughtfully. "Decided against it." Without another word, Josiah walked to the corner of the room where J.D. had finished his armor plating job and he started tucking the insulation back into place.

"What? So you two are just going to take on an entire gang?"

"Buck will help," J.D. said. Vin had no idea who Buck was, but unless he was Rambo on steroids, one more person in the middle of this mess was just volunteering to be another murder victim.

"We need official help with this. I am not the cops' biggest fan, but if you're talking gangs, that's who we should go to. We could drop them an anonymous phone call," Vin argued.

Josiah pulled off a long strip of drywall tape and carefully sealed a seam before answering.

"Plenty of people would like to see this neighborhood change."

"Well, yeah," Vin agreed. He was one of those people, and unless he'd missed some signal, so was Josiah. None of them seemed to have the gangs on their Christmas card list.

Josiah stopped and looked over at him. "I'm not talking about just the gangs," Josiah gave Vin the same sort of look Vin's eighth grade teacher had always given him when he got the wrong answer for x. "It's the way of the world. The middle class forgets an area, lets it decay, and then when they decide they want it back, here comes the gentrification. The police clean it up, the middle class moves in, and the poor are pushed off to yet another corner of the world."

"What?" Vin wasn't sure when this had become a political debate, but he hadn't brought his cliff notes, that was for damn sure.

"If a man shuts his ears to the cry of the poor, he too will cry out and not be answered."

Vin just frowned in confusion.

"Proverbs 21:13," Josiah added helpfully. "This is our home, and these people have asked for our help. We do not shut our ears to the cry of the poor, and as long as the politicians control the police, they are not truly on the side of those honest but poor citizens who would call this place home."

"You're all crazy," Vin told the room.

"He's a quick learner," one of the homeless men commented to the other. "Usually it takes people longer." His partner just threw down a card and announced gin as he laid his cards down.

"You're all completely nuts," Vin repeated. No way could he get himself into the middle of a gang war. Hell, this wasn't even going to be a gang war; this was going to be a gang massacre. He needed to get word out to Captain Rodriguez before all hell broke loose.

"I cannot ask you to stay if you don't feel the calling in your heart," Josiah said sadly.

"But you're going to stay and try and fight off a violent gang with a .22?" Vin asked.

Josiah just gave an enigmatic smile and turned back to his drywall job.

"It's not as bad as it looks," J.D. suggested.

"Yes, yes it is," Vin contradicted him. "You have no idea who you're up against."

J.D. smiled. "We've actually been doing this for a while, Josiah, Buck and me. You'd be surprised at who we've gone against."

Vin might have followed up on that tantalizing lead, but Josiah had moved to his side so quietly that Vin just about jumped out of his skin when Josiah took him by the arm.

"I'll see you out," Josiah said as he pulled firmly on Vin's arm. Vin didn't really have a choice about leaving, not unless he wanted to start a fight, and given the strength of the grip Josiah had on his arm, Vin did not want to start that fight. Instead, he got firmly escorted to the exit and left standing in the brilliant Tucson sun.



keep reading at http://lit-gal.livejournal.com/339235.html

[identity profile] mulder200.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
I feel like Vin at the moment. I just got thrown into this world that while confusing, I want to know more about.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
Hopefully I can keep this from being too confusing for the M7 virgins ;)

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[identity profile] xocoatldreams.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:33 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I think I'm gonna like this!
and
but Vin was, unfortunately, cute, I don't see it as unfortunate *veg*

*edited for a question*
Once you've got the 'verse established are you going to let others play in it like Mog did?
Edited 2010-03-14 06:30 (UTC)

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. And yes, I'm always open to people writing in my verses, so these guys will be no different.

[identity profile] dine.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 06:17 am (UTC)(link)
oh, this is intriguing - it's always interesting to see a new take on the M7 guys; can't wait to see what's coming

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)
The only M7 I've read are some Gil Hale crossovers, so hopefully I"m going into new territory

[identity profile] bumpkin-is.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 07:12 am (UTC)(link)
I want to see where this is going...::is fascinated so far::

Heh, and with what you said in the intro, along with how things are set-up so far, I have a feeling that Nathan and Ezra are going to be fairly close approximations of their old-western selves - a self taught healer and a grifter who's been outsmarted somehow into helping. *g*

keep penning,
Marns
~pN

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I am definitely trying to keep them in touch with their western selves even if they have modern lives.

[identity profile] tobiasven.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! see, it just reels you in and then you are stuck loving these idiots. And I was your book on dream spinner press for april 12..more YAYs.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
You really are. They're *interesting* and interesting is always good.

[identity profile] delibby.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much.

[identity profile] meeee3339.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
Is this what the interactions in M7 were like-Vin trying to be all big and tough, J.D. a headstrong kid, and Josiah just gently and compassionately parenting the lot of them? 'Cause if it is I'm going to have to rent the movie Even though I have not watched a "Western" since Young Guns came out.


More, PLEASE!!!!!!

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Vin doesn't have to work quite as hard at big and tough since with his big ass gun and background as a bounty hunter he is seen as big and tough. In today's world, though, I see those looks giving him a little more grief. J.D. is TOTALLY a headstrong, sweet kid. And Josiah starts the series a reluctant member of the group because of his guilt over his past, but by the end of the series he has started quietly parenting.

[identity profile] chaoskir.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Interesting start, even when I don't know any of those characters! I'll keep reading it because I like it very much how it begins! Thank you!

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, and I did want this to help those who had never seen the show.

[identity profile] rogue-psion2.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the interaction between the men so far and look forward to the next part.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much.

[identity profile] seadragonlady.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Off to a good start and even though I haven't seen any of the shows just the movie it doesn't make it seem necessary to catch up with them. Works fine for me, I'm looking forward to more.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I really did want to do something for people who hadn't seen the show and couldn't keep track when thrown into the middle of seven new characters at once.

[identity profile] boogieshoes.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:01 pm (UTC)(link)
mwahahaha! i knew we could suck you into our fandom! seriously, can't wait for more. :-D

-bs

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
The fandom does have some pretty high suction power, that's for sure. I just don't know where the LJ communities are. I usually post at a few when I start a fandom I don't usually write so that people can find it.

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[identity profile] texanfan.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 03:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I've never watched Magnificent Seven (although the movie is one of my favorite westerns) so I'm kind of at sea here but i'm very intrigued.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I really am hoping to take people who are lost with this fandom and bring them into my AU version of it before I start any crossover.

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LOVED it!

(Anonymous) 2010-03-14 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm a huge fan of the original, and love the ATF AU, and have read just about as much M7 fanfiction out there as is possible. I am REALLY enjoying your new AU - and cannot wait to read more. I adore JD, and really appreciate how you've represented him here - young, yes, headstrong, hell yes - haha! Totally loved the "parental" feel of JD and Josiah's relationship - really felt "right" especially after viewing true episodes like "Achilles" where Josiah gives JD guidance. EXCELLENT!

Re: LOVED it!

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I just finished watching the entire series, so I really do hope that the voices are close to the canon selves, even if I'm changing the circumstances.

[identity profile] winks7985.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
wow! i really enjoyed that! and i look forward to where you will go with this.

:)

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I really am having fun with the new, shiny toys/boys

[identity profile] ael68.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooo, great start. Can't wait to see more. Intriguing au.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I will definitely be writing more.

[identity profile] samson28.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 08:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Great start and definitely looking forward to more. I do love all the interesting aus that have come from the m7 fandom. :)

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I've read a number of ATF stories. Heck, when I went looking on Amazon, I wondered if there was a modern remake of the series that I had missed, but alas, no.

Magnificent Seven--The Tucson Team

(Anonymous) 2010-03-14 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this new AU. I have the complete TV series on disk and watch it whenever I need another fix of the "boys." And I've probably read hundreds - maybe a thousand - fanfic based on the series. What's great about seeing the series is that when you read the stories, you have a mental picture of each character. And just about every viewer has favorites, although I enjoy the interaction among all seven. I look forward to reading more of this, especially since you left Vin standing in the hot Tucson sun. And, he is cute - just can't get around it - love the series Vin with long hair.

Re: Magnificent Seven--The Tucson Team

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
It really is a very fun and very slashy series, so I'm not surprised that it has inspired so much fanfic. I do think that the series is a great way to get a feel for the characters, but hopefully this will be an introduction for those who don't know the series.
ext_63603: king to Mr. Spooky make you feel better? (Default)

It's all your fault - so gimme more!

[identity profile] nomadbeth.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
So - you made reference to M7, which I've seen in crossover-land before, but suddenly felt like I should check out further. So I did, and I'm amused.

But, I also get annoyed with the ATF thing, as these dudes are seriously not as 'law abiding' as that makes it look - so interesting start on a universe... I'd like to see where you take it.

Re: It's all your fault - so gimme more!

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
They do technically work for the law in canon, but I have to admit that I can't see them making it in modern law enforcement. However, I still love the ATF AU. Love it, but I want to make my own AU with a more tarnished version of the boys.

[identity profile] lil-coyote.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Not an M7 watcher, so I'll take this like an original fic and looking at it that way, it's got my interest.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, that is my goal: to help people who have never seen the show.

[identity profile] sarah0832.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I watched this series some time ago. When I watch it now, I can't believe how slashy it is in canon. All those hot men bonding. Whew.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
It's incredibly slashy. Hell, when JD goes to leave town, his girlfriend his withdrawn, but Buck is just about crying... tell me, who really loves him more???

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[identity profile] huntersglenn.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm liking this so far, and looking forward to seeing how you portray the rest of the 7.

Thanks for sharing.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. Buck is next on the agenda--he's known JD and Josiah for a while. Ezra (like Vin) is a newcomer to the group.

Great AU!

[identity profile] sfulton229.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice idea and love how you have Vin, JD and Josiah in this. It's nice to see Josiah's more religious side and I can see him as the local religious figure who doesn't back down to the punks. JD is his outgoing self who is doing what he can to help and not realizing just how bad the situation is. Love this idea for Vin; exploring the darker aspects of the character but he still is a good guy who has been thru a lot. He makes a great undercover. Terrific to get a gang war started and I'm sure the guys will finish it. Looking forward to more! Please keep going.

Re: Great AU!

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2010-03-18 04:46 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I have read ATF AUs when they were in crossovers, and one of my biggest surprises when I watched the show was just how religious Josiah was. I enjoyed his spirituality, and I definitely wanted to bring that into my Tucson AU.

[identity profile] tpena19.livejournal.com 2010-03-19 12:14 pm (UTC)(link)
This is intriguing. I like the world building you've got going so far :)

[identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
This is just brilliant! You've done a great job of describing the characters here. They all stand out as quite distince people. And I love the priest. He has a real 'this is the right thing to do so I'm just going to do it' attittude.