lit_gal ([personal profile] lit_gal) wrote2013-10-10 03:01 pm

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I need a new eye. My het story (I'm 40K into the rough) is turning out to be more and more about this Lakota family.

I would hate to say truly stupid things that would offend a group. Is there anyone who is Lakota or who has strong ties that might give me a quick read (no editing, just general content), and tell me if I'm being horribly insensitive at any point?

It is scifi, so the culture is projected into the future, but they are pretty adamant about hanging onto their heritage, so I would hope they would be at least culturally related to current Lakota.

[identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com 2013-10-12 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
This is more about family structures and gender/sex identity. If you have an email, I would love to have you look it over.

[identity profile] polly-b.livejournal.com 2013-10-13 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Sure. pollyabywater@yahoo.com