ext_75048 ([identity profile] sfulton229.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2010-03-17 01:21 am (UTC)

Great AU!

Very nice idea and love how you have Vin, JD and Josiah in this. It's nice to see Josiah's more religious side and I can see him as the local religious figure who doesn't back down to the punks. JD is his outgoing self who is doing what he can to help and not realizing just how bad the situation is. Love this idea for Vin; exploring the darker aspects of the character but he still is a good guy who has been thru a lot. He makes a great undercover. Terrific to get a gang war started and I'm sure the guys will finish it. Looking forward to more! Please keep going.

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