Hmmm, I wonder who that would have been?? LOL Poor Jim, just when his life is getting more and more complicated, his past comes back to bite him like this!
I haven't read the other comments yet, so I'll likely be repeating some folks, but I love how you show us Jim fighting his Ranger instincts in order to go undercover. It's very evident that he's been out of the game for a long time, and that he's more vulnerable that he should be in this situation. Simon must have been very desperate indeed to let an out-of-practice officer go undercover alone like that!
And Jim has a lot more guts than I do when it comes to dealing with bad-guys. I don't know if I could stand to ALLOW someone to point a gun at my head, even if he was pretty sure that they wouldn't actually hurt him. As for the animal cruelty... they all deserve to have those spurs buried up to the hilt in their balls for the rest of their days. Ugly, disgusting people. :-(
For some reason I could tolerate the torture from Beautifu Broken a lot more easily than I could read the cock fight in this story... maybe because this feels so much more real. Once again, you've done a marvelous job weaving together plot, emotion, and character development. Now on to chapter 6 for me!
no subject
Hmmm, I wonder who that would have been?? LOL Poor Jim, just when his life is getting more and more complicated, his past comes back to bite him like this!
I haven't read the other comments yet, so I'll likely be repeating some folks, but I love how you show us Jim fighting his Ranger instincts in order to go undercover. It's very evident that he's been out of the game for a long time, and that he's more vulnerable that he should be in this situation. Simon must have been very desperate indeed to let an out-of-practice officer go undercover alone like that!
And Jim has a lot more guts than I do when it comes to dealing with bad-guys. I don't know if I could stand to ALLOW someone to point a gun at my head, even if he was pretty sure that they wouldn't actually hurt him. As for the animal cruelty... they all deserve to have those spurs buried up to the hilt in their balls for the rest of their days. Ugly, disgusting people. :-(
For some reason I could tolerate the torture from Beautifu Broken a lot more easily than I could read the cock fight in this story... maybe because this feels so much more real. Once again, you've done a marvelous job weaving together plot, emotion, and character development. Now on to chapter 6 for me!