Very nice, loved your descriptions of the magic, the background story of how she got there to begin with, beautiful...and the manip is equally lovely. This surprises me as I normally can't abide Spuffy, maybe it's because I thought of him catching her as a means to try and return her to where she belongs and not of his wanting romantic entanglements with her. I like the idea that he would go through all that trouble to save her when everyone else seems to be content to hide.
Thank you for posting, you certainly can turn your hand to anything and make it an enjoyable read.