ext_15304 ([identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2015-12-22 12:45 am (UTC)

I know it's a big job to put this many characters on stage at once. I'll take another look at revising this, and texasfan has suggested slotting them into "family" roles--the grandmother of the group, the big brother, etc. That might help

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