ext_15304 ([identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2015-12-18 08:10 pm (UTC)

During editing (which I only have time to do now), I decided that the beginning didn't work. I needed to introduce the people before I started in on the main conflict. So this is my solution.
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