ext_29998 ([identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2005-12-23 03:49 pm (UTC)

So Dareh is a benevolent slaver, that's a new twist, human farming for the sake of mankind. The awful thing is that there's a horrible sick sense to it. Poor Xan he's so confused and tired right now, Angel better hurry with some rescueage.

Yah for the paperclip!

BTW a couple of times part way through you called Dareh - Direh (just thought I'd mention)

Another great chapter,I've stopped trying to second guess you because you keep on surprising me.

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