ext_7846 ([identity profile] slashpuppy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2011-05-04 06:34 am (UTC)

Kin Of The Soul 64

Dagnabbit... Joyce! *cries*

I wish there wasn't this huge gulf between Xander and his Scooby family but I'm so glad that Xander has Angel and the rest of *that* family.

By the way, three chapters in one day? You rock!

...

Now where's chapter four? ;-)

Wee fixes:
-"It's a hard lesson to learn, and one that took two more than two centuries for me to understand," Angel said. [that took more than]
-she had to trust that God had chosen her for good reason." [for a good reason]
-The cemetery workers were standing near some equipment, clearing anxious to get the casket in the ground [clearly]

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