Okay. Wow. I loved your story, even when I messed up and read chapter 17 before chapter 15. Oops. Still great. Your Blair was much more the scientist than what I've seen in fandom. Also his mother issues provided a great catalyst. Naomi reminded me of the hindu goddess Kali, all about the chaos and destruction for rebirth. Which was a great take on her activism, change for the sake of change, she seemed very blind to the fact that sometimes change needs to be slow. And I personally would love a sequel, your story hit all my sentinel buttons. Besides which seeing Blair grow into his role as shamen would be awesome.
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Still great.
Your Blair was much more the scientist than what I've seen in fandom.
Also his mother issues provided a great catalyst.
Naomi reminded me of the hindu goddess Kali, all about the chaos and destruction for rebirth.
Which was a great take on her activism, change for the sake of change, she seemed very blind to the fact that sometimes change needs to be slow.
And I personally would love a sequel, your story hit all my sentinel buttons. Besides which seeing Blair grow into his role as shamen would be awesome.