Looking Buffy right in the eye, Spike answered. "Meaning I have come to redefine the words pain and suffering since I fell in love with you." Oh, that's beautiful!
Typo: "You know suffering? You tried to rape her," Dawn blurted out, her anger staining every word. "How can you sat that to her?" I think you meant "How can you say that to her?"
I can just say that I never truly hated myself back then. Not like I do now." Oh, dear. That can't be healthy.
"Well, yeah. That's where I learned about triggers," Xander said with a shrug. From movies? I'd been figuring that was a soldier memory.
Typo?: "We had the spell ready," Willow said cheerfully, her voice cutting through the heavy silence. "Had" suggests the spell was ready earlier? Should it be "have" in that the two of them have been spell-working instead of focusing in on the intense conversation?
Each of us puts a drop of blood in the cauldron, and then we pour the potion on the four corners and the magic in the beams will carry it through the house." Ooooh, there's folk-brewing magic that works like that! Not with the blood but with putting beer/mead into the corners of the house.
"He's family, and he's going to be part of the protection spell," Xander said, his expression turning stubborn. Good for Xander!
He'd always figured Red set the rules in her relationship with Tara, but now Tara was making it clear that when she put her foot down, she expected others to follow. And Xander—the boy had knackers Spike had never suspected. Truly, though, he should have. Oh, nice.
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Typo: "You know suffering? You tried to rape her," Dawn blurted out, her anger staining every word. "How can you sat that to her?" I think you meant "How can you say that to her?"
I can just say that I never truly hated myself back then. Not like I do now." Oh, dear. That can't be healthy.
"Well, yeah. That's where I learned about triggers," Xander said with a shrug. From movies? I'd been figuring that was a soldier memory.
Typo?: "We had the spell ready," Willow said cheerfully, her voice cutting through the heavy silence. "Had" suggests the spell was ready earlier? Should it be "have" in that the two of them have been spell-working instead of focusing in on the intense conversation?
Each of us puts a drop of blood in the cauldron, and then we pour the potion on the four corners and the magic in the beams will carry it through the house." Ooooh, there's folk-brewing magic that works like that! Not with the blood but with putting beer/mead into the corners of the house.
"He's family, and he's going to be part of the protection spell," Xander said, his expression turning stubborn. Good for Xander!
He'd always figured Red set the rules in her relationship with Tara, but now Tara was making it clear that when she put her foot down, she expected others to follow. And Xander—the boy had knackers Spike had never suspected. Truly, though, he should have. Oh, nice.