God I love this story! The way Xander is just so insistent that Spike be included in the spell. I love your Xander. *is happy*
Wee fixes: - There are some protection and warding spells far more powerful than the traditional ones, but they're dangerous. ["There] and [dangerous."] needs quotes before and after - "True love is willing to knock someone out?" ["True love means being willing]??? or something like that. It sounds a little off the way it is - "True love is willing ["True love is being willing] - the two witched [witches] - any more magical hijinx [hijinks] - It was Buffy sad gaze [Buffy's] - How can you sat that to her? [say] - We had the spell ready [have] - he mouth set in an unhappy line [her]
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Wee fixes:
- There are some protection and warding spells far more powerful than the traditional ones, but they're dangerous. ["There] and [dangerous."] needs quotes before and after
- "True love is willing to knock someone out?" ["True love means being willing]??? or something like that. It sounds a little off the way it is
- "True love is willing ["True love is being willing]
- the two witched [witches]
- any more magical hijinx [hijinks]
- It was Buffy sad gaze [Buffy's]
- How can you sat that to her? [say]
- We had the spell ready [have]
- he mouth set in an unhappy line [her]