ext_7846 ([identity profile] slashpuppy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2009-02-09 01:32 am (UTC)

The Cost Of Butterfly Kisses

I second one of your other reviewers... this has an intriguing setup and should be the start of something longer! :-)

I love Spike's politeness on the phone. And the fact that he could recognise whooping cough! Sometimes it's useful him being as old as he is!

I do like a suffering Xander. But I much prefer it when Spike makes it all better! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!


Wee fixes:
- She was a soddin demon [soddin']
- unloading little knick-nacks [knickknacks]
- The lot of you is dumb as soddin rocks. [The lot of you are as dumb] and [soddin' rocks."]
- pulled out a cigarette and lighted it. [lit it.]

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