I second one of your other reviewers... this has an intriguing setup and should be the start of something longer! :-)
I love Spike's politeness on the phone. And the fact that he could recognise whooping cough! Sometimes it's useful him being as old as he is!
I do like a suffering Xander. But I much prefer it when Spike makes it all better! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Wee fixes: - She was a soddin demon [soddin'] - unloading little knick-nacks [knickknacks] - The lot of you is dumb as soddin rocks. [The lot of you are as dumb] and [soddin' rocks."] - pulled out a cigarette and lighted it. [lit it.]
The Cost Of Butterfly Kisses
I love Spike's politeness on the phone. And the fact that he could recognise whooping cough! Sometimes it's useful him being as old as he is!
I do like a suffering Xander. But I much prefer it when Spike makes it all better! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Wee fixes:
- She was a soddin demon [soddin']
- unloading little knick-nacks [knickknacks]
- The lot of you is dumb as soddin rocks. [The lot of you are as dumb] and [soddin' rocks."]
- pulled out a cigarette and lighted it. [lit it.]