ext_190669 ([identity profile] lemonbliss.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2008-11-04 04:44 am (UTC)

Oh wow. I am so glad I checked in before bedtime. Fantastic.
I think this is your best chapter yet. Seriously. I loved it.
It took turns I did not expect with lots of action and laughs.
And our guys are working very well as a team together.
Plus I loved your description of Riley. I have always thought him to be very good looking. And he gets a raw deal from most writers. I liked his character.
Anyway, thanks for the update.
Raenae

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