ext_30041 ([identity profile] bumpkin-is.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lit_gal 2008-04-29 09:24 pm (UTC)

Brava!!! I *loved* this. So much, and why? Well, I can only echo what others have already said - quintessential Blair and Jim, prime example of the 'Sandburg Zone' at it's best, and so wonderfully open to a sequel. *g*

The part that had me howling the hardest:

"Maybe we should get some beers."

Fuck. Blair only suggested beers when the Sandburg zone crossed the Twilight zone. "Blair?" Jim asked, a warning in his voice. Sandburg finally got the key to work and he darted into the loft, beelining for the refrigerator where he pulled out three beers.


and then this part had me giggling pretty hard too:

"Okay, man, I have no idea how to say this. Okay, you know how I am so not an exhibitionist? I mean, you've dropped trousers so often the girls at the prison probably compare notes on your anatomy."

Fantastic stuff, and frankly the oddball, but believable nature of the situation just make this so much more interesting... (heh, the intersexed thing gives a whole new meaning to 'berdache' eh?)

Thanks for penning and keep sharing, *g*
Marns
~pN

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