This is such a well written fic. Thank you for warning about the whipping. I admit that I stopped reading this ch. and will skip to the next one. (I'm a wuss what can I say and I can't stomach Jayne being hurt by River on anyone for that matter, even though I do grasp the concept that it will cleanse him.) but, I wanted to at least comment on how much I'm enjoying the rest of the story. You're a very gifted writer and it's easy to lose oneself in your story. :)Ali
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Date: 2008-01-14 12:54 am (UTC)